asaade9999
You know, I like this one. I like it a lot and am really glad it was picked up here.
It's a kind of lol lol let's take a stroll kind of a novel. It's not serious, like at all. A derpy and funny read about a young student who got involved with secret wuxia folks. It reminds me a little of "The Breaker" manga, but in way more light hearted manner. A slice of life with a twist. Yeah. I like that sentence. There ain't gonna be epic battles of good and evil, fate and demise. It's a story to read on a way to your work, it's greatest values would be unhurried pacing and occasional smile while reading. Recommended. Uncle's Stamp of Approval.
Shameless 5-star author review. This novel is a passion project of mine, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. The focus of the novel is action and adventure equally, with absolutely no other genre. The martial arts are centered around reality and science as much as possible, albeit greatly exagerated. The world is something I've invested a lot of time into building, as well as integrating into the plot in a logically justified manner.
Please give it a read if you're interested.
The story was going well.... until the shotgun ending that just ruined what it had going for it...
Loved Max and Nico, a great pair that played off each other well, the system aspects were largely left behind after about midway through the story. This includes Max's continued development of his system 'powers'. After that point it becomes bigger and better mecha, which is awesome, but they get used... once or twice before being replaced.
Overall about 3.5, unfortunate as I was hopeful of the story continuing.
if you think this novel is wrong, then go and read different books and get back to reality. all of you guys still dreaming and don't know or see what is really happening in real life all over the world for so many years.
i don't say it is ok, but what can we do, it is here for more then 2000 years or even more. and it will continue to happen for thousand of years.
if i or others can do something about it, i will support them with all my heart. but after what happened to me personally i see the dark and ugly humanity. and if you want to survive in this world, the real world then you need to accept what happened all around us and not complaint.
if you complaint, you think things will be different? i wish it was, but it still the same for thousands of years,
so if an Author write a story and novel that have many things that we have in real life then why not read them. i will read this novel as much as they give us chapters to read, if it will be pick up. i think it look like a really promising novel :)
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O my! It's back yehy!!! Worth the wait
I hate to say it but I would act exactly like leo if it was me :)
aw crap forgot there was a word limit you don't have to read this part if you don't want to.
having be recognized and there being more chapter's would be nice because this novel has humor-action-drama-cute animals mythical or supernatural beings I t has I t all so please do give it a chance.
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A pure waste of time. 2/3rds of the 20 first chapters are spent on the reactions of some random unnamed characters, the author is so blatant about it that even if the concept is cool he's already managed to run it into the ground.
Haven’t read it yet, but I’m inferring from the title and synopsis, that someone got their hands on the crabby patty secret formula and this is the account of that
Wating for it to countinue
Where are those chapters
