I wish everyone read this book! It's amazing! The descriptions are beautiful and so vivid that this story feels so realistic! I wish there would be some way the author could attach a map of what the kingdom looks like... Maybe in the future! Amazing story that's definately worth your time!
The crusher's crush is a premium book! I love it!
Another beautiful Forbidden Romance. I've already started reading lol
curious to see what unfolds
Love the story so much but can’t wait for Theodores POV :)
Love your story???
great but it has few grammatical errors
29 chapters 2-18-23
It really is an interesting twist on the Urban genre where the main character (MC) plays as a villain and counter-attacks the protagonist with the help of a system. Essentially, the MC’s job is to eliminate the protagonist, but he cannot do it directly; instead, he must gradually strip away the protagonist’s halo, luck, and plot armor. Since the MC knows the entire story of the novel he is in, his strategy involves stealing the protagonist’s harem, support, and opportunities, effectively reversing the narrative to harm the protagonist.
The most intriguing aspect of the story is how the MC begins his journey before the protagonist is even introduced. He meticulously plans and counters every move the protagonist might make, and the system rewards him for these actions. Having read up to chapter 385, I can say that the story primarily revolves around the MC stealing what would have been the protagonist’s harem.
The narrative is very linear and easy to follow, and even the raw text is quite readable. It follows a similar structure to other urban novels, but with the unique twist of the MC having a specific mission (to steal everything the protagonist would have). So far, the story hasn’t delved into themes of racism or overt nationalism.
However, there are a few aspects I don’t particularly enjoy:
- It seems too easy for the MC to upgrade his skills to god-like levels.
- Despite being the villain, the MC doesn’t really come across as one, and the protagonist doesn’t act like a traditional hero.
- Although the concept of the butterfly effect is mentioned, the story doesn’t significantly deviate from the original timeline, even after the MC changes many major events.
**Spoiler:**
At first, based on the system named "Villain Counter-Attacking System," I assumed this was a world-hopping novel. However, it became clear by chapter 1+ that it isn’t. The novel features multiple protagonists, each introduced as the current one is defeated and the system is upgraded. As of chapter 385, we are still dealing with the first protagonist. I’m curious to see how the author will handle the second, third, and subsequent protagonists, and I hope the story avoids too many plot holes.
I read about 200 Ch and it's just too bad for me
I mean, although i knew from the start it wasn't the best, i decided to give it a try
But the more i read the cringer it becomes
By chapter 180 bro is sharing his divine spells, secret skills and posions with his servents
The fan service is cringe af
Mc is retarded with a 7 yo kid brain
One example is his fiance broke with him from one side and for no reason she is trying to kill him by hiring killers
Mc's uncle is too op and can destroy her whole family if he knew about that
But nooooo
Bro is keeping that secret and just waiting passivly for more and more killers to come cz he is trying to find an evidence to prove her crime to the public and get his due under the law
What a good citizen!
Hope u guys get a glimpse of his iq from this
IM OUT !
Does the mc's son get stronger or something or does the mc forget about his son?
Omg, the author is the same author who wrote Jobless Reincarnation, the granddaddy of isekais.
intense hero in every novel I've seen this tag in, mc makes senseless stupid moves