Demon6746
thank you for this wonderful story
A blind woman with green orbs....I think it's her...idk...I'm too excited to read further, author...this book is amazing......
Very nice book cover ! Love it
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Girlllll can't wait to read this book once it's available in app!!!!
update more please......
I love this story. I wish I could vote for it.
I read this scene and I literally had to put the book down for a minute because my heart was pounding. The way the author builds the emotional tension is just—how do you even describe it? It starts with this awkward, almost comedic moment where Luo Ran is trying to get up from Chu Jin's lap and he won't let her go. There's this weird comedy to it, like, girl, just tell him to let go! But then it shifts so quickly into something much more charged. The moment that absolutely destroyed me was when Chu Jin's callused hand pinches her cheek. Think about that detail—the author specifically mentions his palm is rough from years of martial arts training. This is a man whose hands are made for violence, for combat, and yet he's using that same hand to gently (well, gently for him) touch her face. And then he kisses her. And Luo Ran's reaction—she trembles all over, she tries to push him away, but she can't. The description of his chest being "hot and hard" and his aura being "terrifyingly domineering"—you can feel how overwhelming this moment is for her. She's not just physically overpowered, she's emotionally overwhelmed. This is someone who has every reason to be afraid of him, and yet there's something in that kiss that makes her freeze instead of fight. The interruption is brutal. Not just because it stops the scene, but because of HOW it stops it. Chu Jin doesn't just let go—he deepens the kiss one more time, like he's trying to memorize it. His voice is reluctant. His thumb strokes her cheek one more time. And then he says the line that's going to haunt me: "Go wait for me in my room." What does that mean? What is he planning? Is this going to be another moment of dominance and fear, or is something going to shift? Because I have a feeling that when she goes to his room, everything is going to change between them. The emotional whiplash of this scene is incredible. You go from awkward comedy to intense passion to sudden interruption to lingering anticipation, all in a few pages. I'm not okay.
may be the worst story I have ever read in this platform
Great story
when will there be book 2? I am on the edge of my seat!
I'm so loving this story line
exciting and inspiring
no dulling moment ......
