author use sentence and words: that being said, obivously, However, way way to much. The explanation that roan is capable of pretty much everything related to combat just because he was death is illogical since his job was only to send them to path of reincarnation, all characters have same reaction, talk same way, the bast point in story (destruction of planet) is ruined since author didnt bother to show how that affect their relationship,mentality etc at least not nearly enough. There are to many unnessery explanation which make a reading annoying, english is gradually becoming worse. The premise of story itself is pretty good and intresting unfortunaly its poorly done
I am already in love with the MC I really hope he can make it past these hard times and love how the world is slowly being build upon and not a information dump The son was a really good character I hope to hear more about him
She frowned. "So, what's your deal?"
'The wolves did nothing wrong, they were just at the wrong place at the wrong time. A little prayer seemed appropriate.'
Tir-lee-tir-lee-tir-lee-dee
For this one going trough treasures there are many but since I am in ATG world I have decided to use the Sky Poison Pearls design since i cant just copy it because my brother doesn't get it to later when he dies. Along with that I'm gonna use the Eternal Heaven Pearl as well for the time abilities even though I cant make its effects 1 year outside = 1000 years inside since that requires a lot of energy so that can be upgraded later and finally the last two treasures added will be World Piercers so I can go anywhere I want no barriers and planes can stop me though it will not be like a weapon but still in Pearl form (Don't know its actual form sorry if it upset people) and the Mirror of Samsara so I can be reborn if im aciddently killed. The new name of this Teasure which will be classifed as World Teasure like wise any other trasures that i make will be classifed in this level will be called the Pure Heavenly Posion Pearl.
Chapter 2
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?
Only shooting stars break the mold
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"You know they are really soft" he said teasingly.