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I mean, this is the highest review I've given this site so yeah.I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff. Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!
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Overall 4.2There were quite a few mistakes (mostly writing quality) though it doesnt really matter it makes me pause to read it a few more times to make sure im reading it right (for example: she instead of he) since sometimes i might read wrong or get confused
Wow, with just only 4 chapters and your novel has already hooked me. Lemme give some stars. Keep up with the works bro. With high regards and respect.
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Hello, I just wanted to everyone to give me their honest opinion, I just hope that this work would be able to impress some readers........
after reading first 20 chapter.good novel until now.after reading synopsis I have zero expectations about this book. story start with mc getting rare bloodline ( not unique) and he travels between earth and another plane.i think earth and that plane become merging in future chapters.multiple power system us another factor like mage,warrior, card warrior..etc. no female lead yet( maybe the cat from otherworld consider as one)
This books deserves more than 5 stars.Thanks for your work friend.