The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging.The updates have been regular.Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come.Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.
It's a fun novel, though you don't want to overthink the plot details as the author obviously didn't. The raw mtl is better than this translation at times as well.
(This review has been made after I posted Chapter 315.)Hey there. It's been almost six months since I've started writing this novel, so I think it's about due time for me to give another review to this novel from my perspective. Of course, if you take a look at the latest reviews I've gotten, you'd see that a great portion of them say that MC acts incredibly cowardly and newbie-like for someone who has a lot of experience, with some of them even talking about how I rely on a certain phrase a lot of the time (the phrase in question is "could not help but").From this point onward, there's a possibility that I might spoil a few things about the story, which I would like to apologize in advance for. However, I'll still try my best to not spoil it.First and foremost, let me talk about my reliance on a few key phrases, with the most glaring one you'd find while reading the story is the counter for "could not help but" in the paragraph comments. Then again, there are a few other key phrases I tend to use as a crutch throughout the novel, but let me point out that English is not my first language.Aside from that, I've taken a great portion of the inputs you've given me, which I sincerely appreciate, and have varied my usage of words ever since. From Chapter 200 onwards, rarely has the "could not help but" phrase ever been used. But alas, reviews mentioning it still pop up, so I guess worrying about is useless in the end.Moving on from that, let's talk about the MC's personality at the beginning of the novel. Similar to the active change I've made towards the omission of the usage of certain phrases, I've also taken action towards changing the MC's personality outright at Chapter 115 into something that was more in line with what people expect from someone with a lot of experience.But once again, I still get reviews about how they don't like MC's personality at the beginning and how they call him multiple names under the sun. Believe me when I say I've already taken note of it and that I am planning to rewrite the beginning of the story once I graduate college (which would happen hopefully a few months after I post this review). I'm not oblivious towards MC's personality at the beginning, especially if I know why he acts like that in the first place.In the end, I just wanted to make this review to tell everyone who is reading and who is planning to read this novel a couple of things. For those who have read my novel up to the latest chapter and are continuing to read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.And for those who are planning to pick up the book from the title and the synopsis, just keep an open mind. It's part of the reason why I made at least 90 chapters of the novel free, after all. Of course, I'd like it if you get to around Chapter 115 at the very least, but I won't hold it against you if you don't.Once again, I would like to thank everyone who has given me support and constructive criticism of what I've been writing thus far, making me realize that I still have a lot to improve on. I hope you enjoy the journey the novel shall take you on.(This review shall be removed once the beginning of the story has been rewritten to fit the overall narrative better.)
One thing is for sure, I will not be forgetting that MC's name anytime soon It's too unique and his journey looks interesting as well.I like MMORPGs and this looks like it is one of the better written ones out here on WN.
loved it. I cried when bonnie died. this book should be published
I would like to give this book a ...
Amazing crafted with a lot of imaginations
I am a fan of Zayn Larson. I like his character.
Michael is very controlling
Very exciting story.... Can't wait for new update of the story. I give 5 star rating
good book!
when u will update the next chapters.... can't wait any longer.. plzz update fast