Had anyone tried this yet? Honest review please
Su Jianan has been disappointing me more and more each chapter. When you think they'd finally be smarter.... They'd be more stupid
Great story so far! I can't wait to see how it progresses.
This is one of the best authors I have found while on this app so great job on all you have accomplished! I hope you keep up with this book and keep up the good work!
I love the story. Yuri chased a lot of people away. Even if I don't like it too, I still enjoy the thrilling parts of an overpowered Mc novel.*currently in chapter 125.
Honestly, a great read that keeps you captivated. I won't delve into any spoilers, but it's gives a nice fresh of breath air into the apocalypse and "isakai" genre (from what I've read do far).Progression is satisfying as the MC doesn't abide by clichès and continues to surprise.???The interactions seem realistic enough without being a bore.Anyway, just read a chapter or two and have a look for yourself.For the author:Keep up the good work Mate! ?
Очень плохой текст, как по качеству так и по наполнению.....................................................................................
So interesting story but I’m going to drop.First, the English and grammar are decent. There are issues here and there but they aren’t too distracting.Story development: this is where the quality drops. It’s an interesting concept but the logic behind actions do not line up 5 times out of 10. This means that of the 10 actions the mc makes, 5 of said actions are complete forced plot or made up reasoning. I’ll continue this with the character design cause they mix.Character design: ok until the characters show skills they have no right to be able to show. The mc is a supposed city kid with no survival skills. Then he is somehow able to tell different breeds of wolves apart from each other. Then he is able to skin and butcher animals. He literally goes from no survival skills to all the survival skills. This is further exacerbated due to him having no tools/knives to help with his actions. The author obviously doesn’t understand that skinning an animal can’t just be done with your hands. I need at least a sharp knife.World background: ok but ties into the other evaluation. The mc makes constant assumptions that have no actual logical backing to describe his situation. Then the author doesn’t describe some things until they are relevant to the story at hand. This leads to even more unreasonable assumptions and actions that have no tells to why the mc actually did it or what is actually happening.
The story is quite interesting, and i was quite amazed how long every chapter was. But upon continuous reading, the explanation just goes on and on, it's like 40% main story and 60% explanation on how things work, what that thing is, etc. This made me skip a couple of paragraphs, but still get the gist of the story.So author-nim, please omit the long-winded explanation, and unnecessary inclusions.
Dropped at 40 chapters? What is wrong with this website nowadays? Can a large company like Qidian get their act together and act... normal?
Just scrap the voting pool already Webnovel. For the second week in a row, the novel with the least amount of votes is the winner of the voting pool. Do they think we're blind?1. MMORPG: I Can See Hidden Information - 1,169,563 votes. 2. I Established A Magic School After I Failed the CEE! - 628,540This novel however...A grand total of 98,370. Although this is descipicable practice it would be tolerable if this story was actually decent. Instead, it's a cardboard cutout. The despair...
- Review as of 20 chapters in:This is a transmigration system novel in a cultivation world that is ruled by sects. Our mc Is transmigrated into a 14 year old boy called Kai, who is a slave with nothing to his name and gets a system. Now unlike most systems I dont find it to be too op or broken yet, Which personally I like. Makes the mc seem more vulnerable, relatable and allows for growth. What does his system do you may ask? Read it and find out.•Writing Quality•Author has the occasional grammatical errors, however as an avid reader I read very quickly and build an idea of what is going on in my head therefore Isn’t noticable for me.The way author lays out system status is very nice and easy to read.•Story development•Unlike most sect creation novels, mc doesn’t (or has yet to) produce anything out of thin air such as a sect building. This gives the novel a nicer, slower pace than other sect building novels.This seems like a novel where we will see the mc work his way up step by step and toil away to build his sect. I say this because the Author might have foreshadowed mc becoming an alchemist in order to secure funds to operate his sect. Furthermore, bare in mind mc is only 14 years old. I imagine most sect leaders are much older than this and therefore may be quite a while before we see any actual sect development. However there are already signs of the mc’s first disciples, which is a good start.•World background•Author does a good job of slowly introducing the background world and not info dumping everything all at once. It also helps that mc knows almost nothing as well so as he learns we learn with him.All in all this looks like a novel with a lot of potential and was something I enjoyed reading. I wish that there were more chapters, so thanks author looking forwad to see what happens next ??✨