Love this short but awesome scp fanfic! you dont find many of these that are actually good. pls continue. love the story and I dont want to see it disappear
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is set in a world filled with dungeons caused by some solar storm. ??Our MC is pathetically weak in the beginning , but is not a coward and does not panic too much in life threatening situations .The characters are particularly well written, with realistic personalities. Also our MC has a unique system called "The Information System ".Not much is told about it since the MC is weak as of now(14 chapters). Personally, I didn't feel any problems reading this novel. There weren't any major grammatical errors. ??This novel definitely has potential and has peaked my interest. It's definitely worth reading . There are no slow parts and although it's not a difficult read, it is very engrossing. ☺☺Keep up the good work and hope that your writing gets better in the coming chapters ??
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??? this guys is really making money of someone else book ??? the original book is Lord Of The People: My Explosion Rate Is 100%.
only 2 chapters i will come back again .?
I don't want to change the world with this novel but as the story, world, and characters became too close to me through my fantasy (D&D) I couldn't just dismiss or ignore it like nothing. I hope some of you will find this novel of mine interesting.
I really like this story. It's hard to find a good story wehre the MC doesn't get a cheap cheat and has to work for almost ewrything. I also like how the story gives a good point how it would be possible for it to work and not some random luck. But please explain the characters more.
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This story seems to contain an apparently fictional game world, where people have their characters created with their real names, probably with real looks too, through reincarnation. So it just makes me believe that it is not a game but a real world that they enter through this method, then they see that there are methods of cultivation and magic, and the protagonist is reincarnated as a god I can imagine starting from there that things are not as simple as they seem, well just wait for the rest of the story if it is chosen for translation.
Not that bad, but it's still an average Chinese novel...I didn't finish this because it's not my tea and kinda boring for me...I feel like I read something like this somewhere.And I also think it's not worth it to pay for this.I don't think this will be picked as there are more stories out there better and have a very interesting story. Overall, it's 3/5 for me, and yeah! Good luck! :) ;) :)
If you are stopping in the very start itself then, you shouldn't have started to write the damn novel.And it doesn't take much to update a chapter occasionally...