The storyline really started off great, but felt the author lost the line of thought completely after the Governor was brought down. The title and where the story is at has no connection at all, except for the first few chapters. I got all the more disappointed after the incident where Dr Jeffrey got injured, 6-8 chapters were posted completely irrelevant to this book, new characters, new storyline, god save the readers!!! And then after multiple comments the author started posting the story related to Jeff but again reading it brought no sense to the story.. days to weeks to years in one chapter and then goes back to another character, that character moves from days to weeks to years.. read the last few chapters posted on October 30, every single chapter has paragraphs to paragraphs repeated only difference being the character is different. I started reading this book because of the authors own review which said she wanted to bring up the issues a lot of women go through, agreed it started that way, but what happened?? There is no end to the revenge she was planning and in the meanwhile a side story started and from being doctors they became Prince & Princess, fine understood, but without any context how can a few days become months and years. A reader reads because of consistency and a move in a story not jumps in a story. I am very disappointed that I even paid for those irrelevant chapters and on top of everything brought privileges..
This is a great novel so far I’m slowly getting more and more addicted to it.
"....." Mr. Rioy was silent with his serious expression.
"And rule number 3 is, we can turn back the time only one time."
Chapter Complete
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?
Only shooting stars break the mold
I need to get myself away from this place
"He is Shinjiro Mizuki from my class"
Before Allen even had the chance to finish his statement, these figures all swung their fists towards him without any restraints. Their fists seemed to have the effect to affect the wind as it condensed and attacked Allen.
Both parents turned to the little boy looking up at them expectedly. The queen smiled at him as she leaned down,"And... she's got a giraffe!" She enthused to the little boy, who giggled at his mother.
I can see the high walls of the city and it must be at most 200 meters. I am at least 2 kilometers away from the city but the sight of its heights is really fascinating. I just turned level 15 from the fights I had along the way form the forest. First, the giant warthog, 2 plant-trap monsters and a monster called Ascavarian; a monster with tentacles and a sharp razor in each end of it. Those fights weren't rich with loot however I was able to learn that I can cast spells without using the menu button. I was able to learn another spell buff and it was for a "Mana Bless" heal" which I managed to level it up to its maximum.