John did not change the outward appearance of the dungeon so it looked exactly like a 3-storey building, not intimidating but sure to be the most difficult dungeon ever created in history.
As they walked out of the room they saw Lana laying on the bench looking at the ceiling while the alphas and seconds in commands to be glaring at her. He clapped his hands and said in a loud voice "Since Ms. doeson has a doctors excuse she will be staying on the side doing worksheets while the rest of you have fun in the dodge ball tournament. Good luck to all and may you all do your best."
Suzuki was stared by Tsurai with teary eyes and looked very embarrassed while Mina was putting her hands together in front of her as she make an apologizing face and as for the woman she looked like she was trying to say something but when she made eye contact with Suzuki swallowed her words then looked downwards
"Dude how can you even think like that!"
In the distance, they could see four small, distinct figures in the ocean and they were clearly where the ice-shells were coming from, launching them from over the massive distance between the bridge and them.
Ultimately he had a mother that loved him, while, in my previous life, I was just an orphan.>
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Interesting story concept, but some immaturity in writing technique that disturbs the flow for the reader. From switching between 1st and 3rd person perspective every paragraph or so, to restricted vocabulary and/or repetitive word use (eg nearly very sentence in a paragraph starting with or exclusively using the pronoun, ‘she’). For me, this many grammatical issues in the opening chapters has me dropping the book and leaving a cautionary review for those readers who find these kinds of consistent flaws to be off putting too.
I like this story a lot
This is not a review I just have a question. Is this novel dropped. The author hasn't updated the novel in like 2 months. This novel actually had a decent story and the world building was also going good. But now it seems its another dropped novel.
Being a shameless translator, I will just rate myself 5 star. Everyone please support my work my joining my pat-reon link in the description. Peace out ✌️
Seriously tho I have meet down syndromes that make more sense. Hahaaaahhha this is a joke. Stop deleting my reviews they are 100% accurate and would save a lot other peoples time