After reading 130 chapters.There are quite few things I like very much about this book that I would like to share:1. Characters aren't flat, one-sided and brainless, quite the opposite complexity, daily struggles and depth are normal. I especially love that MC isn't plowing through everybody and everything but makes mistakes and suffers the consequences. There is only one small flew in few characters, it's their a bit cliche humor.2. World building is quite complex and feels real, not making the reader question if other characters are mental or physics doesn't exist.3. Realism is best served when there are heavy topics involved and nobody has a perfect simple solution, which is the case here.4. Only one thing that I kinda dislike is a bit slow paced action and I don't mean the timeline of actions, because I would even like for the MC to progress more painfully, but the dialogues between characters reveling their mental state. Hope it helps, I really like this book so far, I'll update my review after or around chapter 200.
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lot of sucking cut and if you are new transaction team . read it up 24 .fuvk up my mind.
interesting concept but falls a bit short. I ended up just skimming the chapters at some point since there are a lot of repetetive "he freshend up, ate, and went to sleep. woke up and trained.." repeating. and it is to slow paced for my taste. dropped when I felt it had been aged since he progressed in any meaningful way and I looked ahead seeing there were still like 30 chapters until his next breakthrough.
I understand that the tags said that this would be a face slapping novel so obviously the main character is going to be arrogant and everyone else is going to kinda bad out to him and not actually think for themselves and just go along with everything that the main character says. That's fine with me however I do kind of have to draw the line when all the characters including the main character all act like there two dimensional. Mike really within the first 10 chapters we have our main character go to an alchemist place and apparently he knows every pill that there is and even made some of his own all of a sudden nose what type of pill it is and then once he has a woman serving him tea from whoever was making the pill because of a whole bunch of face flapping nonsense you know what usually happens in those kind of novels. But anyway what the main character does is to this woman that's kind of trying to seduce him probably brakes are completely degrades her and then flips around and says you're going to be my maid now and there's no room of discussion no yes she has no nose and then it just happens. I do like my overpowered novels or even my face swapping novels but when there to such an extent I can't get into the feel of it. If it's shoving your hand in someone's face who's being overtly arrogant and then I can get behind it but when the main characters acting like a real piece of s*** pure person and is an ungodly amount of arrogance for honestly Someone who lived a very not arrogant worthy life it's but hard to follow the novel. But hey I'm very aggressive when it comes to my reviews and I'm brutally honest and spill everything out that I think bad. The good parts of this novel can probably outshine the bad ones especially if you give it time but I'm not going to stick around for that. Keep writing author hope if you do any other books are not in the same type of face slapping genre because you're writing style not too bad
WORTH TO ADD!I give five stars for this story because this story deserves it. At the beginning of the story, Hiro appears as an annoying little brother and I hate him but I also like him ? The author managed to make the characters very well that's why i like this story. I also really like the world background, reminds me of Sao, by Reki Kawahara. love it 100%
Bro I like it how you make a world and define them but make a op mc and you make him believe he is weak I hate it,don't take offense on this but it is better if you make the mc have logic us
Honestly I’m just here to see if this is really just stuff that happened after crazy necromancer.
Well...what can I say? A new unique Concept which is hard to come by....a hidden gem!! Grammar is good...update stability is good too...7 chapters a week...9/10 from Me...?
Wow, what a great story . I can see that this story is gonna be amazing. Everything in the story is great, including the grammar, plot, and background. I can't wait to read the next chapter
I have just finished reading this novel and I am confident to say that this is one of the best novels I have read.The story plot and development are amazing and the world background is explained in a good way making the us read it without being confused and giving us a understanding of the plot and the story .But the only drawback is that are some mistakes in the grammar and some time some words are repeating or some letters are not there in the words but if we overlook that then this novel is fantastic ???...I hope the author fixes this problem and thank you for your hard work in providing us this wonderful novel.All the best and I am looking forward to new and exciting chapters released in the future ??? All Hail "The Monarch of Heaven's Fortune" " Jun Tianyun"
good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876