My first time reading something of this genre, I would like to say, the author has done a really good job here. The writing has became better by every chapter.So, it's a thumbs up for me.My best wishes to the author ??
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the writer is very good at describing the background of the incident, so the reader seems to be among the main characters. They have a unitary character. I really like this story cerita
I shall make this rated.....................................................................................................................
The story so far interesting as it uses the two concepts in one. The world building is done very good and as for the character they are developed well. so yes it's worth reading as the story is unique.as for cons- the start is a little slow but if you can go a few chaps in you will be hooked :)
providence troupe??.....lets hope its good...raw..............................................................................................................................................................................................
Good And Very good Novel Moreee ......
The setting makes no sense. The MC runs a small animal clinic, which the author claims is doing poorly. The reason being that a bunch of large and unethical animal hospitals have lost business to him. Instead of turning on their actual competitors, they all decide to send people to harass an obscure clinic.Also, it's hilarious how the MC decides to keep prescribing stuff despite instantly curing anything with the system, in order to earn money. In essence, the MC began running an unethical animal hospital himself.
a wonderful book which keeps u hooked from d very beginning. there r some similarities with extra's survival and author's pov but still it has it's own shinning points and hope author won't change that.. a good story with a protagonist who isn't bland or a naive kid but someone who knows what he's doing and has no moral bondings for his plans. keep up author, great job
This book is absolutely amazing! I read the author's other book 'Reborn as a Nephilim', and this is far better than that!Not that RAAN was a bad book, but this is really good!This is a lot more fast paced and interesting in general.
Can only be said to be decent. It’s not good nor bad. It’s a system and eastern fantasy novel with a couple twists. It’s enjoyable to read and grammar is nice. However there are a couple bad character designs. Firstly, MC reincarnates and inherits a system. This system makes it so that he can exchange points for op items. The former soul had 9 disciples which were all evil since the former soul was evil as well. There are a couple plot holes in the story. For example, MC reincarnates as an evil person who had an extremely powerful soul and lived over 900 years. MC himself has lived for less than 30 years I’m assuming and has a weak soul. Apparently he inherits all the 900 years of memories and still stays the same? This doesn’t make sense at all. He should have had an extreme personality change at least but probably still should’ve lost his mind and started believing that he was the previous soul. After all, 900 years of life is a lot more than 30 years. He shouldn’t have been able to stay the same because he was just a mortal in his previous life, he didn’t have a powerful soul nor mind. He didn’t even have plot armor at this point. I’m guessing the author just forgot about this. Anyways, the next plot hole is that he doesn’t stay evil. He changes to good. This is really a major plot change since I personally came to read about an evil villain trying to control his disciples. I didn’t come here to see a goody-goody hero MC change his evil personality to good and also make his evil disciples into righteous disciples. The title and synopsis are very misleading in this case. It should be called, “My Good Disciples.” The synopsis should’ve stated all of this and I blame the translator/ author. Anyways, this really doesn’t make sense since the system is also a good system. The previous dude was evil but had a good system? This is a big plot hole. I don’t really like this novel because of how misleading it was. I read the title and synopsis and thought to myself how awesome this novel could be. I couldn’t wait to read about an evil MC who lost all his power try to control his evil disciples who would kill him if they knew he lost his powers. The system was kind of weird and random as it didn’t really fit in. I didn’t see the purpose of a system but I thought that it might be there to help the MC to gain his power and also to help make some arcs. But I was disappointed very quickly. The ‘evil’ Mc is actually a good hero. The evil disciples are actually becoming good disciples because of the MC. The system is a good system and it’s giving the evil MC missions to change to a good MC. This was really disappointing. The entire synopsis and title was completely wrong. Also I’m really sorry author but this plot sucks. I doubt you could keep this story going for longer than 200 chapters. If you do keep it going for longer, the quality will drop by so much that it will be able to cause a coma by reading it. If you make the MC progress to slow, the quality will drop by chapter 100. If you make him go at a medium speed, the quality will drop by chapter 175. If you make the MC go fast, the quality will drop by chapter 70. I wish you luck author. My advice is to make him go at medium speed and write maybe 200 chapters. I get that you’re being different but this really isn’t how you do it. You were supposed to get rid of the system. Keep the MC’s evilness. The plot should be that the MC is supposed to climb his way back up to the peak while keeping his disciples under check. It should’ve been like those reincarnated god novels where the MC reincarnates and has to start from scratch. However the disciples and evil mind personality would have given them a unique read. If you had done this, you would have been able to write 500 chapters of decent quality or either 300 chapters of excellent quality. Now that you’ve screwed the plot by making it a goody-goody MC, you can at best write 500 chapters of garbage quality or 200 chapters of decent quality.
this story isn't good.YOU SHOULDN'T READ THIS NOVEL. first problem:the translation quality.the translation quality is exceptionally bad. I honestly didn't read something translated like this since almost 10years(grammar errors, repetitive sentences, unclear paragraphs and more) second: the story is not original.you might be thinking at the start of the story "wow so original, he was forgotten by god" or other stuff however this idea has existed long before in other critically acclaimed novels. Specifically "everyone else is a returnee". If I were to be honest about my feeling I would say that this is a mediocre copy of the previously mentioned novel with both poor translation and poor imagination form the author. third: the saving grace?As mentioned in the title of this section, I still think that there's a saving grace in this novel. what is it, you might ask. well here it is : the unfinished state of the "game"this, for me at least, was a saving grace because even if the mc defeated a powerful enemy or solved a difficult puzzle he could get absolutely nothing.furthermore the interaction between the mc fighting in a world very real and the unfinished state of other stuff was most of the time enjoyable. CONCLUSION:Should you read this story?No.Is this story absolutely trash?No, even tho it's bad, unoriginal, badly translated, it can still be enjoyable.I read this story and really enjoyed it who do you think you are to say something like that?Exactly I am nobody except for myself. Certainly not you, this review is ultimately only my point of view on this story. I would still recommend to check out "everyone else is a returnee" if you liked this novel.