Bless you! I was stalled, but now that I know what happens with her I'm encouraged to read it.
yeap, i was about the start but when i checked i saw author didnt post any chapters for 7 months.
For some reason reading it feels a bit all over the place, can't figure when a scene starts or ends and environment feels vaguely explained, feels like things just happening from one point to another without journey and explanation
ch 258 not mr hentai
The story shows promise, but the linearity of the story is confusing. Characters are introduced and then forgotten quickly. The story itself is confusing and bounces around constantly, especially with the time skips and changes development. Like what happened with his sister or Emerald? why did they just stop being mentioned? What about the rest of his family? Who the hell is Xavier, and why did he get a single mention in a chapter and then never get explained? The story has promised, but it seems like it's steam rolling forward with no linear progression or sense.
Let me get this right... This dongfang whatever run out of house fuck a stud who doesn't care about her for one night and even told her that he will never meet her after that but she was happy netherless but after one month of that one night stand she became pregnant and he doesn't care because he doesn't know too so it's all his fault???? And his child born by her has to suffer it? Humph.......?
Love everything about this , please don't stop updating it.
somewhat awesome in stealing others women, keep it up!
Narration is too good, character development of each one is awesome. Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Looking forward for the character developments and more good story arcs.
Obrigado tenho só a agradecer já li várias fanfics de basquete e essa é uma das melhores sem dúvida
Já li a tradução anterior desse tradutor e só tenho a agradecer
Por favor continue?
It is good, better than those trash, but please update your chapter more consistently, about once per week or every 3 days is ok.
I would like to see what is happening with Fermos group ?
If you're tired of the same old cliché's from nearly 90% of all popular LN's. Then I suggest skipping this LN. The plot armor is really bad, and the MC's child hood trauma doesn't make sense. Either MC got rap'ed cause he was friends with a girl (mc was raped by his male cousins and uncles) or they rap'ed MC's sister and broke her legs afterwards (cause mc liked a girl.) oh and btw, the MC was like 3 or 4 years old when he was friends with said girl. lol.