Honestly, as a reader I tend not to read anything that hasn't reached at least 200 chapters. I breached that rule when i started this novel tonight, and it turned out to be the best thing i have done in a long time. The story is absolutely enrapturing, the exposition is sweet and concise, theres no unnecessary info dumps, it builds itself so beautifully and im still wanting more. Ill be here for ever chapter from here on, thank you very much author.
I have to say this is a nice one Its not anything new or unique but it gives the reader a feeling that its going somewhere and not just gonna drag on forever without ever concluding anything like some books on this platform
There is way too much information dump in every chapter, which I mostly just skim through.I only have one thing to say about this novel.It's BLAND!Seriously, it's boring.Don't get me wrong I love this genre of novels, in fact it's the only genre I read.But this novel.............tsk I have tried reading it 7 times now! yes I tried to force myself to read it 7 times hoping that just maybe I will develop interest after all it is my favourite genre of novel.But it's JUST SO BLAND!I don't feel anything when I am reading this novel.Literally nothing at all, like I am reading a story which my teacher told me to recite in class for everyone to listen, just skimming through pages.Perhaps if you are someone who like huge amount of information every chapter, this might be for you.P.s I only managed to get to chapter 47 even after 7 tries so maybe the story gets better later on who knows, but still I don't think the blandness will go away as it is literally a problem with the writing style.
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This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didn’t delete it), so I’m gonna make another.Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable.Updating Stability-4/5Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but I’ll round up cause you can’t do that on wnCharacter Development- Pretty bad, 4/10World Background- meh, 4/5The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies
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MC is not Op. I like douluo dalu.So far good. Like in the book if mc don't mess the orginal plot it will be great.Please regular update.Rooting for you author and wish you would write this book till end.
Liking the MC so far, brutal "friends" he has haha. Writing quality is continuing to improve, and the story is very promising. Logical plot, hateable antagonists, and a great story, great job, author!
Honestly, the writing is bad at best. The grammar is lacking, and reads like a bad mtl. The characters are as 1-dimensional as they get - even cultivation novels have better written characters. The world basically accepts that the Mc has absurd skills and bends to his whim, making the Mc a definitional Mary Sue, and a badly written one. Would not recommend.
This novel has a very good premise, the MC works hard and has a system and I like that combination a lot however there are quite a few problems I had with the novel. Firstly, the MC works very hard and has OP skills ranked SS etc however he's not that impressive. Sure, he's better than the others but he's not astoundingly good and he improves quite slowly despite his 99 luck stat and system. That being said, he is very good. Secondly, the romance is utterly forced, the MC's personality is like 'I love my mom so much, I'll do whatever to make her happy and even have her live with me and my wife after I get married.' MC is also very boring in my opinion, his actions are really robotic and also the way he talks is (or how it's written). However, the biggest problem is the grammar for me. If an editor was hired it would retain a lot more people to read this I think. Paying SS for grammar of this quality sucks. This is not the author's native language, yes, but for the novel to be pay-walled it should have good grammar. A few more points; the upload speed is very good, the author doesn't take long hiatuses like other authors of original novels or even translations. If you're a fan of basketball and steady growth of a main character playing it I recommend this.
This is an awesome book!! Smart and cautious MC, who thinks through a his actions!! Very likeable, and the plot of the story moves at decent pace. Not super fast like some of the recent garbage novels, rather the pacing is reminiscent of the old classic webnovels! Love it!!Hope this book is choosen!