"Well, those people know themselves the best. Every man gets influenced by their peers. But not them. They trust themselves to make the best decision. They are the most ornate people, but sometimes also the scariest." My heart beat faster again and a rare genuine smile escaped me. "That is why I want that kid. She herself doesn't realize what she has done. Ah, but she's already occupied. What a shame."
"Yup, that's it."
Mesla agreed, and I followed along, we found Evets body buried, we did a bit of digging until we saw the missing hands, and after that, we stopped and buried him completely again.
Aaaaaaahhhh... : Natsuhi
#DING#
Meanwhile, in a man-made Island.
Even though she still had a lot of doubts in her heart, concerning many subjects, seeing his concerned expression on his cold face, Ting Mei decided to just let go of her worries and to enjoy her time with him.
With that, the Captain zipped off on the railing, hopping onto the dome and circling around.
Yuht… pretty good. Keep it up. Got pote ntial
Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)
Radueriel: Henricus, why did you betray me? You were my best friend. You were like a brother to me. I trusted you. Why?
Love the story, it's just that I saw that there's a harem tag now... is it really going to be a harem Author-san? ?