First of all, the synopsis is pretty much a big spoiler which tell us that the current Crown Prince Edward will betray MC (Elizabeth) later in the story. Considering his character, I would pretty much sure of that. There r many things that I dislike abt this story, i.e:● Edward is such a non-ML material. I can understand if he is so easily fallen in love with MC just bcoz of her looks n aura. But he is such a weak-minded person that even in his 20 yrs old he's still not ready to bear the burden to rule the kingdom. Not to mention he proclaimed that he loves MC but not refusing low queens in his harem.● Edward's mother (The Empress) is such an idiot empress. MC clearly felt ominous feelings towards her lady-in-waiting servants but she keeps insisting there's nothing wrong n doesn't care abt MC's intuition. She n Edward knows those girls background but still make them by MC's side?? There is no logic in this.Overall there is no personalities in each character except Edward the coward. My main point is, for me personally I think the story-plot is totally not my cup of tea. The way Edward n his mother behave really ticked me off, the way MC needs to bow down before other s.l.u.t.s (Stela n other women) due to the pressure of power really makes me mad, not to mention there is no faithfulness here. If Edward really is the ML then I've to say I hate it. He's gonna has his own harem n accepted it. MC also has no decisive character.I assumed the reason Edward is gonna betray MC later has to do with for his own kingdom's sake n due to women. I'm sure Stela the b***h will ruin their love anyway.So yea that's my personal opinion only. Feel free to give it a try if u want coz every readers have their own preference. Maybe this is the story for u. Thanks for ur hard work, though Author. Don't let this makes u feel down. ^^
this novel sounds good but it needs a lot of work for starters needs a world background i got no idea where this novel is star wars world? i was thinking that at first but MC has got space marine class star wars has no space marines maybe if this was war hammer 40k dawn of war then sure but nope other then that story needs some work too.
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THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD BUT IT NEEDS MORE TO IT!! LIKE WHEN IS THE MC GOING TO GET NEW BEASTS!!!??? DONT TELL ME THIS BOOK IS ONLY GOING TO HAVE THE MC ONLY HAVE HIS 2 BEASTS!!! IF THATS THE CASE THEN THIS BOOK IS GOING TO SUCK AND NOT WORTH READING!!!
Sorry, but this just isn’t good. Like with most video game novels, there’s no actual risk. Also, him fighting the people responsible for his parents death would be good, but it just doesn’t have any appeal when it’s only in a video game.
45 chapters and I am beginning to question myself, why did I have hope in this...I kept saying it would get better but dayum!!...........BS
Good storyline.But the chapter is to sort.
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what a nice beginning I hope you can continue it it would be a shame to stop and I would like to see where this is going...…………………………………………………………………...
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Have A Question? Ask in the comments.As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem.(read the note below synopsis.)Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.