I like the story very much and I am anticipating every chapter I read. This story for me is perfect...Thanks writer for a job well done..keep on...
Yo, you're doin' a great job, fam! Only thing is, the world-buildin' ain't all that, know what I'm sayin'? But it's still a dope story, and I'm feelin' the romance between them two. Shii got potential, for real!
FIVE STARS SINCE THIS NOVEL WILL REMAIN FREE BECAUSE I DON'T THINK I WILL PUT THAT MUCH EFFORT INTO THIS NOVEL SO I DONT WANT PEOPLE SPENDING MONEY FOR SOMETHING THAT WON'T BE THAT GOOD WORTH SPENDING MONEY ON. AGAIN, THIS WILL BE A COMPLETELY FREE NOVEL. JUST A NOVEL TO KEEP ME INSPIRED.별 다섯 개를 준 이유는 이 소설에 그렇게 많은 노력을 기울일 것 같지 않아서 사람들이 돈을 쓸 가치가 없는 것에 돈을 쓰는 것을 원하지 않기 때문입니다. 다시 말하지만 이것은 완전히 무료 소설이 될 것입니다. 그냥 영감을 얻기 위한 소설입니다.五颗星，因为这本小说将保持免费，因为我认为我不会在这本小说上投入那么多精力，所以我不希望人们为一些并不值得花钱的东西花钱。再说一遍，这将是一部完全免费的小说。只是一部让我保持灵感的小说。
It’s a great book, very interesting ✨ thank you for this masterpiece !! I am c’ really happy to have discovered this book, can’t wait to read more !!!
this the 10th novel I read best of every i appreciate the writer this story line is so good
Hey there ? author here! So, I’ll be leaving this review for those curious about giving it a try after checking the synopsis. Also, if you're enjoying the novel, don’t forget to leave a review.This is my first attempt at a kingdom-building story. There might be some sci-fi elements in the future, but for now, expect a foundation and OP mc. The prologue was originally a different setup, but I changed it. Feel free to skip it and dive straight into the main story. Enjoy the read ? and let me know if you have any questions!
Short overview of my experience : The story had potential but the writer failed miserably.• Writing quality : average Sentence framing are quite poor. I think the author is trying to imitate the writing style of korean authors ( in general) but failed to execute it [short,sleek, engaging]• The story could have been much more engaging and could have taken a much darker turn exploring the depth and corruption kf the society in general and much more philosophical but regardless he failed to execute it properly.Overall: I am quite disappointed with this novel , keep in mind it is my personal opinion if you enjoy the novel keep reading it.For all the new readers you could give it a try if you want to not really recommended (sorry) , but you might like it who knows ?
Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!
This book is immersive, it lets you feel like the mc and what he is going through eslecially the beginning chapter (1-6) because that's how far I've gone and I don't regret adding this book....HIGHLY RECOMMEND
I think you need to go a little deeper in the world's lore. BUt the story have has a lot of potential!!!!!!!!Keep goin, author! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Wow. Just wow. I am impressed by the quality, especially when you see it's actually from a new author. Please continue your book and don't keep us hanging. Peace!
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