MaryAyaz
"Entertaining and thought-provoking, 'Beauty and The Bodyguard' captivated me from the very first page. The novel seamlessly weaves a compelling narrative between a beautiful yet strong-willed woman and her dedicated, rugged bodyguard. Their evolving chemistry was both heartwarming and edge-of-your-seat thrilling. The exploration of trust, self-discovery, and the power of vulnerability made it an engaging read. A must for fans of romantic suspense, this book left me eager for more."
Nah its just that the chaps are very small
Gotten any recommendations
I would f***ing love it more if it was only one fl(Ellen) just made the interaction with other girl characters a little less and Charlotte stuff at the beginning. just my opinion I am just imagining in my head the story with ellen as fl only I like the way they think of each other and tell the stuff like(don't die I will also die)reminds me of neph and sunny a little I would love it like that not the slow romance like ss tho.Their relation will also be complicated because the demon king thing and hero and the progression from that their feelings for eachother Ellen showing expression I would love the story
Btw I do love this also I don't hate harem type story (caught up with weapon replicator) also am enjoying it this is just my opinion.
its very similar to many dao type chinese novels. there is the mortal world (usually just a large planet), then there is the outer realm area which is within the home universe but very large and houses the mid range 'top of their home world' cultivators (these beings cultivate things like laws of concepts like space and time sh*t like that, rather than the basic sh*t you do on the home planet). and then it gets to outside of the home universe, where the cultivators are basically just gods that can blink and destroy universes. The mc is rather friendly, especially to his loved ones, this is not an evil mc, but does some questionable things. the novel is rushed toward the ending, the last 200 chapters were noticeably worse than the first 400 chapters but still good enough to finish the novel.
Money first! everything else later! lol
It's a well written novel with a likable protagonist, a clear goal, nicely written side characters (I wanna say well written, but most of the important ones are in barely 10 chapters) and a nice ending. Overall, it's greatest flaw is how short it is and, for me personally, that the set-up romance never happens, tho I guess that itself also fits nicely in the story. Second biggest flaw is that the protagonist is the classic Novel child character - way smarter than any child her age should be... Tho that isn't really a problem. And the part that icked me the most during my read was the reveal of the truth, which was a minor disturbance in my read. It's also written in fppov. Overall, the flaws sound overwhelming, but most of them are not really distribing the experience. Hope you'll enjoy it. It's no Shadow Slave or Lord of Mysteries, but it's a nice story to read when you have some free time
Let’s be real. Both Ml and FL are kinda horrible people. In some senses people are always so dramatic when they see a man whore as a male lead. This is ancient China, MOST if not all men had more than one women if they were a noble unless they were a Enoch. It’s realistic, so people kindly get over yourself that you think a historic isekai novel based off of a real time period doesn’t confirm to your very 21st century morals. That being said he’s still a piece of shit lowkey. A disgrace of a man, most of his women were killed/ died and the few women who still were alive were treated terribly because he fell in love again. As a 21st century person I can understand not wanting to share a man. However in the very minimum he could have taken care of his various children he had with them, and treated them with respect/ friendliness. Fl allowed various people to be raped her brother and the ML. Yes he’s kinda a bit slutty but putting something in his food and randomly pushing him into someone’s bed for revenge/ scheming isn’t really alright at all. They’re both pretty toxic people, and overall deserve each other. FL is also a horrible mother, so is ML for using his own child as a bargaining chip to gain affection. However both main characters used and abused people for their own benefit. Neglected all moral codes so they could be happy at the end of the day.
I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person.
No real complaint about spelling or grammar.
There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.
Naughty Book, That's all I am going to say ?
Who the f writes a beautiful story only to delete it?
Wonderful story! Hard to put down, and keeps you wanting more. Truly hope there will be a 2nd book to follow
