The writing is good, plot is kind of unique but character development is needed. The main story goes around Iori but still now she is playing the role of weak, inocent woman...
what a shitty novel this is..the plot hole are so wide.its more shitty than a typical Chinese urban novel
All the chapters are gone I restarted my phone several times checked in other devices got a whole new damn router and can’t find it where they went?
The picture seems quite epic. Let's see what the novel is like.
Continue please. Can I request some romance scenes to you ?
The novel looks great so far and I hope you continue writing it instead of dropping it halfway through.
The first chapter was kindaa ok as it was only one chapter but i can say this has a lot of potential. and also i like the part where he is goona give the mc powers of other charecters
es interesante ver como el mc lleva su vida con un sistema ntr y disfruta con esa característica mientras cada acto ntr le da más poder para hacerse más fuerte
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
I'm kind of confused. I like this book but is there harem? Please no harem
I must say, it was a refreshing read. I love a feisty lady, and Eve delivers just that. The story is nice. The story is just getting started, but it is already captivating. Looking forward to Eve and Damian building their relationship with that attitude.
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