Nice book,the title and everything is captivatingkeep it up ?
The setting seems to be pretty cool and I am quite interested about the world of your story. You did great with writing the king as he is a very hateable character and the system seems to be pretty interesting. Although I got to admit that the dialogue feels kind of iffy at times.All in all, I would say that this is story has potential. Keep up the good work!
Yes! Thank you! Finally a vr novel, no harem, with a female character, no yuri, and an unforced romance. Just for that I am a fan of this novel?. Mark seems like a nice guy I hope he gets more development, otherwise I love this novel❤️
okay, Chase and Mwe's character development in just 3 chapters is done pretty effortlessly, 3 chapters isn't enough to judge it but the fact that 'god is dead' in the synopsis got me curious to dive right into the book, the description and the world build of heaven and how it might be is done well, isn't a wordy novel so its easier to process for non-native English speakers too, plus the plot seems to be heading into a fineass direction
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The story is hard to follow. If you miss a single word the entire chapter becomes confusing with how dense the writing is. Don't get me wrong, the story idea and the story itself is pretty good, but there's just a few things that I don't like. I'm picky when it comes to stories.
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I really like the plot of the novel so far and the unique cultivation system seems innovative and I like it, I really like Silver's cultivation specifically as well, void cultivation is a great concept.
So far, its been an amazing story. A story that also inspires and motivates the author.There are lots of lessons in this book, ranging from love, patience, strength and focus.Its a book to read for everyone..
This is my first time using this app. My friend recommended me this, and I totally did not waste any of my time. It is good and very refreshing specially if you prefer realistic fiction. Thumbs up to the author ?
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