well build story, at first it feel so poetic but after I read it more, It's hard for me to stop, so good , I hope you keep writing because it makes me upbeat when read it!!!
Seems like a great start. I like the story development
I just finished the story, and if I didn't have childhood trauma, then I would have shed maybe a tear or two. However, the ending felt rushed(nothing is perfect).
The author keep adding fillers and dragging story for too long in each arc. Everything becomes more mess. Running story in parallel and left with cliffhanger and switch. This novel has potential but no longer in my opinion. There are lots of typos. when it becomes premium, there are more fillers. Each chapter is too expensive.
Is he a villain or a anti hero, because I prefer a villain that is willing to do whatever it takes and is apathetic that doesn't care people lives, and he hope there's no romance/harem it ruins the stories and doesn't make any sense that's why I love other villain protagonist web novels such as reverand insanityThe ruined death knight Alien evolution system Cursed immortality Sadistic player in a fantasy game world Soul of negary Ect.
Good original novel.Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms. How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.
I’d rather not read novels as lacklustre as this calling for votes. It isn’t even a decent novel in comparison to other novels of its type..
The Synopsis is really what caught my eye. The author has you yearning to know what happens to their lead. Of what I've read, the story is very descriptive, well-planned and easy to visualise! The author's commendable grammar alongside character development is to look out for! Must read!
After about chapter 830 its just older chapters released as what the chapter claims an anti piracy measure but makes it unreadable as they were never updated a shame as this was a very good book
*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: If you plan on pausing for a time, you should update your readers and let them know why via either your synopsis or reviews... if you dropped the book then you should re-title it to "Dropped" or something else of the like so people don't start reading it unless they are okay with an unfinished story.;,;.Positive feedback: I really enjoyed the five chapters you have written so far and hope you continue writing.;,;.Personal Feedback: I really enjoy this story so far and hope to keep reading, but, if you don't update by 6 months after your most recent chapter, the first of the following month I will drop it.
This is a really nice story. I liked the beginning and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! Author, please keep going and give us your best!
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