MuhammadDadang
hope it will be chosen or someone just get us the raw link..............(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ(✷‿✷)hope it will be chosen or someone just get us the raw link..............(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ(✷‿✷)
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Nothing too adventurous, since a lot of the themes are very familiar, but the writing quality is better than most. Sadly the plot development and writing style is quite immature, often childish, lacking descriptions in some places, and thrusting the reader too quickly into new events and new characters with almost zero build-up in others. Even then it was ok until plagiarized characters started turning up in the story, totally ruining it.I do enjoy a cheeky little homage, with a little wink wink nudge nudge here and there, but bringing it up more than once is obnoxious. Just have your moment and move on, let the reader at least pretend you didn't steal a character, other-wise just tag it as fan-fiction so those of us expecting some originality can bypass it. Blatant plagiarism totally ruins a story for me, and I just can deal with it. Just don't do it, guys. Just don't.
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Grammar and misspelled words are so bad I has to drop the book a few chapters in. The story itself is great though, it's a shame it's barely legible.
Nice one.... Looking forward for the book two.
Austin and Leo's personality, uhm hot and their friendship is great. Excited to read Austin and Jenny's love story.
Best book so far. carry on ............
Good story. Very interesting and pleasant to read
The FL is so weak and boring. The story kept me interested at first ( mysterious) but a lot of things don't make any sense and are illogical. I don't think I'll finish the story.
more chapters please...
A very good book
