A little slow and confusing.i had to go back and re-read a couple of times to understand what was going on with the story. But all in all I think it is a good story.
Go to ********** and check out the new translator for this novel they already translated it to chapter 66 and hopefully well get more chapters because Webnovel wants to **** us over
i thought fan-fic is hard to get through webnovel's system, because of copyright issues, i think this is the first one that should be a fan fic in here(released by webnovel), just based on similarities on OPM, like the training and balding stuff.Idk what to expect, but we'll see if this can really reach trial read or the Editor's not paying attention.
Writing Quality: There are very few errors that caught, which is the obvious and very small mistakes that most non-English as a first language speakers have to deal with on a consistent basis. Everything is extremely well written and is easy to read, while flowing smoothly. Update Stability: Chapters are updated daily which is great! Nothing to say here!Story Development: Wow! What a great twist on the tower and system genres! The unique twist on Ho-Seok's ability is done well so far and the rewards he receives are a great boost to his powers! I can't wait to see how this progresses further and how OP he truly can become!Character Design: Ho-Seok is a well developed character. I rather enjoyed his interactions with Calin and they felt natural. None of the introduced characters have felt flat and each one has their own personalities to hate to love or love to hate on! World Background: The world is expansive! Unique areas and the tower provide an excellent focal point to expand into different regions with more variety. The author does a great job at writing the world around the characters and really draws you in. Overall: Not enough great things to say about this novel! Absolutely recommend checking it out and I promise it wont disappoint!
wow. Just Wow! this book is just so good I couldn't stop reading!Hitomi as a character feels so relatable and watching her through the course of the chapters, from her feelings to thoughts, was just great!Definitely A Gem of Books!(｡ﾉω＼｡)
I'm reading this author's second novel, and all I can say is that I'm impressed. The author did a good job with the descriptions and characters, just like in the previous book. I appreciated how the author chose names that are frequently used for online or video game usernames. The grammar was also excellent. Not simply the book but also this author is highly recommended.
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Novel:绿洲中的领主i am posting chinese name for those who want to read raw. Its a good novel, sometimes boring but still good enough to read. Anyway enjoy
new genre by dream! what else do you need to give it a try! well planned, well written and a well developed story :))daily updates so no worries regarding the update stability!nice one, (highly recommended)
The translation is near impossible to read, the story feels disjointed and doesn’t flow at all. It feels as if things just happened. I personally don’t hate the cliche concept of the book, just the execution... well wasn’t satisfactory.
To many holes in the writing... there could be improvements, but the jumps are bad, the mc is trash because everything seem to be rushed and random in the story... I read up to 176 chapters and I think I am dropping this... good luck.