She see daniel then one gorgeous woman get out from the house door , and hugged lee daniel ....
"I know! Let's have you wear sexy underwear for her!"
Honestly fantastic story great plot so far not too fast or too slow and just some moments have you laughing others the seriousness, it’s a phenomenal read that I’m very much looking forward to see where this amazing author will take it
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Jess chatted with the captured miners and the odd gnome as they guided them back towards the mining camp. Everyone was hungry, and the duo's rations ran out quick with many mouths to feed.
However; his fear won and proceeded to touch her soft and warm check, and when he felt she was indeed there and was real, he felt that he could breathe again. He also noticed that there are times that she just doesn't pay attention to what is happening around her like she is in another place without care of what is happening to her physical body that worried him and a lot.
"Nice to meet you, I'm Miguel. Alex's friend, i mean boyfriend. Actually, I saw her and we talked awhile ago. She actually told me to wait here."
I’ve never posted on a story before.This story is amazingly beautiful, please keep writing. Even if it’s only one more chapter.
yes, starting is not bad need to see more
It's kind of a new way to start a story but nonetheless it's refreshing to see a new story, character building is also good, looking forward for more..
This story has good world-building and amazing plot! I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes fiction and cultivation! Thank you author for such an astounding story!
I find everything in this novel great except the writing quality. The story and character development is phenomenal with little information of character background now and then. I find this story really intriguing and engaging. Eventhough i am not a grammar nazi, I have to say that there are many grammatical error which makes the senetence hard to read and understand. It will be better if such things are improved as i have high expectations from this novel.