Ayazia27
Du Peng's old brother kinda reminds me of Itachi in a way
The premise is good and it does aren’t bay the author hasa good plan on how the story should go. But the writing style is so frustrating with so many errors that it is hard to keep reading
Great storyline so far.
looking forward to more.
5/5 for warhammer. Nn
ahhhh!! a multiverse I was waiting for this!! yaaaas(灬♥ω♥灬)(♥ω♥ ) ~♪(´ ▽`).。o♡(♡˙︶˙♡)(๑ơ ₃ ơ)♥(๑♡∀♡๑)♥♥♥♡♡♡٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥( ˘ ³˘)♥(ノ*>∀<)ノ♡◌⑅●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌
Honestly, it's the best football story I've ever read on a webnovel. I'm even happier that mc started playing in 2012 and not in 2022 or 2023
This novel definitely has potential, but based off of the synopsis you have to be creative, and imaginative enough for each reincarnation ??????????????
I’m giving a good review cause most of the time I read and forget if it isn’t bad but isn’t great but I returned to an old novel that I read and immediately remembered this after ending and this is rare I like the story a lot
overall pretty good, can't even think of any constructive criticism.
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So far the novel has great potential. I like how you show their emotions. Both of your novels are great to read...................................................................
A master piece of Vain's novels and one of best novels I read so far. A fun novel with a chad building an empire for VTubers/Idols.
A good novel. The slow budding romance what makes it great. You will get one punch man (most of time). ,Over all good novel. If you want angry youngmasters and jade beauty scenarios then this novel is not for you.
