Very nice novel. Short, simple really liked it.
I liked everything about this world . The system there is pretty interesting and fun. It provides a unique blend on things. The characters were pretty good though , there are a few grammatical errors. They aren't that heavy but some common words. Also the use of terms like cut were done in overuse. It is funny but also . I believe you don't have to do it so long. That's just my opinion. Overall I found this world interesting and so should readers. This is full of cool action.
It shows great potential a lot of leading phrases that invoke curiosity and makes the reader want to come back a potential nail bitter and i like the world building
Author this is one of the best books in this universe. Why you only uploading here? It's only 370 chapters on Novel bin. Please upload there✌️..
okay so over all despite having a short chapter, I'm longing for more to be honest. After all it is about fate and mystery which is one of my cup of teas so- I hope there'll be more of this ?
Plot twist : This is an incremental game where numbers such as 1e7006 ( 1 with 7006 zeros following) are normal.
I liked this one. It is a work that successfully blended fantasy and drama. Poor Inut, he deserves more than this in my opinion but it is the author's choice, respect :)
it could be a good story if the main character was not acting like a monkey all the time, he is pushing around and just when you think he is going to be a man he does everything his wife's family tells him for what? to be treated like a liar, a cheater and fool just so his wife might love him for 5 sentence and then be a bit*h to him again and again it's boring and stupid.
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Alexander, The Great invading the alien community ? ? The idea itself is so unique that you won't find anything like it. You have got to read this story! You did a good job, author!
This Novel is quite good and interesting.Among recent Trial this is one of best.I hope this get pick..it is worth your time and money.Most Important this Novel have cats..and that Cat is Halo
Interesting enough for a read, great concepts but the execution is bit odd Instead of scaling stat values to a lower range we start with random numbers in the hundreds when stats in the double digits would have done the exact same thing, it's like Diablo 3 stats in a novel where you can reach 1T and it means nothing. The DP system is even more ridiculous, Author thought numbers had to be big to have any meaning when 100DP could have been made to be something extremely difficult to reach.When Irene is introduced the novel becomes much more annoying to read as well, at least 25% of every chapter with her is describing her beauty because we, as readers are too dumb to have understood from the introduction, no, literally every sentence with her has to describe her beauty...I just skip over any areas where I see her name now, occasionally I check back and it's a waste because all I was missing is worthless info about her appearance. Expect to encounter chapters wasting 50% or more detail describing how amazing, mysterious and powerful she is for absolutely no reason other than Author thinks we're all idiots. This novel may as well be a tribute to a woman he likes called Irene.World background seems really interesting though, the only other annoying part is how he introduces characters and names, instead of normal descriptions we get "HELLO BOBBY, EVIL DRAGON CAT DOG FALCON MAN GODBEAST THE THIRD, TWICE REMOVED, KING OF TOKYO, LORD OF DRAGONS, BREAKER OF CHAINS, MOTHER OF DOGS, LEADER OF BLACK CAT GUILD, MOST RESPECTED ANCIENT BEING" and equally ridiculous introductions that are somehow supposed to be taken seriously Spelling is good, grammar is decent, that's saying a lot for Webnovel so kudos to Author.All in all, decent read if you have nothing else.