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It has been a few weeks since I liked a story premise well enough to write a review. This book has pretty good grammar and the sentences read well. It never messes up the genders. But the X and repeating same X where they need a different synonym or deleting the 'and X' is still a problem. Skill/Spell names have horrible inconsistency. Most of my 2 Star deduction is due to this. Also, a few too many tropes like 'pouring the whole bottle of pills' are here. This particular trope bugs me a lot. Respect the Pills!
Really a new and interesting plot that you came up with. Liking the way story is going and progressing. The main character is different and keeps getting better. Keep going I can see the adventure-filled novel ,good story!
This book is incredibly interesting ?and I KNOW interesting. I like love it! I It's well written, believe me. The characters especially the female lead Yvonne.I wanna talk about more people but I don't wanna spoil the story for you all, hehe ???
It’s a great read the author is able to take a chunk of history and turn it in to a story that you get completely immersed into before you know it your done with it It’s a great bookKeep up the good work author Although there were something that I got stuck on like how ther were so many perspectives showed at once in completely different places which is normal it still flowed smoothly for the most part
Great world building and character development. Although some parts are hurried like the Criminal District "arc" and a lot of things are missed such as the part where MC joins the Long Gang, it's still a great story nonetheless.The power system "Qi
This was an okay novel. It was a struggle to get through all 40 chapters. I found myself unusually bored while reading. I had to force myself to finish the novel.
This novel is one of the best. I have read in awhile. I hope the author continues with it .
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The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..the romantic bits are good the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading. bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..