grammer, maybe a few here and there, English isn't my first language nor am i too proficient so as long as it's readable and fluid then i really don't care for the small mistakes so 5/5.
character design, the character design is dog shit. it's too bad, even most eastern fantasy novels aren't that bad, i don't even know where to start...actually i do, i will start from the very first few paragraphs. the author starts with a "glimpse" of the future of how in 3 years the MC is gonna be op and guess what the people chant his name as? they call him "crimson lord" dude, the cringe level was so high it covered me like a coat, it would have been ironically less edgy if the people chanted "edge lord" lmao.
he took the "im trash so i get abused and bullied" way too fuken far and he didn't give valid excuses yet. forget committing suicide, I'm surprised that he's alive, and for someone as "trash" as him, why does everybody put so much energy into torturing him and putting him an inch away from life and their lives revolve around it like wtf?!
also, the author like to tell rather than show, he says that the mc is smart but the mc keeps on doing dumb and stupid things.
when it comes to other characters, if they aren't literally trying to kill the mc ust because he has a "trash" power, they are shitting on him about why he still didn't kill himself. and all of them are very obnoxious like holy shit, i would have killed myself whether i have a strong or weak power by virtue of me having to hear these people talk on a daily basis.
that goes for the system too, it's annoying as ****. overall 3/5 just cuz i think there is potential for the story and i don't want to lower the rating too much
stability...well it's pretty stable let's hope it stays that way, for now, there haven't been too many chapters.5/5
story development, i like the fact that it's gonna have to do with space soon enough and meeting new species so on and so forth and that's mostly where the 4 starts to come from, i took only 1 star which is something very generous as what we saw in the first chapter as a glimpse to the future was hella cringe but i can see many ways the author can improve upon it so by the time it's the period where the glimpse of the future showed, he could change things so it isn't as cringe. also, the story is very very forced, like a constipated person trying to take a shit.
I love the story of this novel. Especially I also like Yuri's story. The character development is well made. Also, the MCs don't have a naive side that makes me love this novel. And for the building of his empire, I hope it is not too hasty. I hope his world background is expanded even further.
Story and plot is good i hope mc won't be like edgy chinese novel mc's i like how a nice guy he is , and i don't see problem at the overpowered mc good work keep going :)
The mc is good and not stupid or arrogant, the "cheat" need him to work for the rewards and the world background isn't really original but it's really hard because a lot have already been used before.But the author like to repeat himself a lot and it's a little annoying so only 4stars.
great novel. I love it especially the mc who is kindhearted but acted like a evil villain.i truly fall in love with this novel. keep it up like this.
I hope this book get picked up. Wonder how the story goes as the MC has knowledge of the future. Can't wait for more chapters!...............
Can someone give me a raw I can't find it
Love this story, a good original one, and it's an change of the uncountables Chinese "read my useless fillers" stories on Webnovel.Hope you continue to write it one day.
The premise of this story is halfway decent, the author had some interesting ideas and tried to pull an interesting spin on an old genre.The major problem with this novel is that the author utterly fails to express emotions in a convincing way. The MC feels wooden and constructed because he has either too much emotions or none at all. Side-Characters are a lot better, but not really relevant due to the premise of this story.World building is okay-is, not good, but vague enough to be believable. Differences in planets are almost nonexistent, but again, this isn't a slice of life or exploration type of story. Pasing is another problem, we either get way to much information about things we don't need to care about at all, or not enough to really imagine what is going on.
this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far
I’ve read to chapter 77 so far and I’m loving it. The MC is actually a villain unlike the majority of novels with the villain tag. He only cares about himself, as we see early on in the story. Personally I’m glad the author did a few time skips because I didn’t want the whole story with him being a child. Anyways, when I get paid next week I’m definitely buying the rest of the chapters. Also for anyone reading and wondering if there is romance, so far there is not. I also believe the author said if there is then it won’t be a harem. Anyways great job author. Hope this doesn’t get dropped.
English and Grammar is appropriate. Minimum errors on all current chapters which is good. As it does not have that much chapters, an appropriate review for plot, character, and world background would not be given. However, for a beginning, it would be overall be better than an good amount of works already.Keep up the good work. Happy writing!