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Finished this novel yesterday but forgot to review so here's oneThe Writing Quality doesn't have any major mistakes that I've seen but there might be minor ones that I missedThe story Development is detailed and planned which I like, while the Update Stability isn't the best but at least the chapters have a lot of quality.The World Background is revealed as the story goes on, interesting things happen while some other things are yet to be revealed.
so good I only have a single question is there a discord
Try it out it really is a great book and might indeed be worthy of your time
this novel is good to reading in pass of time
BRUH THIS IS GREAT :'DWell, first, the writing itself is great, and I really love how the author portrays things. It felt like I could visualize it :DAND THENNN THE PLOT IS SO GOOD LIKEE I FELT SO EMOTIONAL READING IT :'DMan I love the characters and the sadness :')Great work, author! Thank you for this! <3
it a really good novel but I don't ha enough ______________fast passes ______________________________________________________________________________________________
the mc is utter trash and beyond stupid picked a Gollum with more disadvantages then advantage over litterky an eagal and a fox with way better abilities like serously it this stupidity just keeps coming through out i just cant anymore idek where i got to except when they left a gaint monster in the forest and i just couldnt anymore i do not recommend unless ypu want to read about a brainless mc who the author wants to have the appearance of being smart litteraly every choice made was stupid i just can't oh and hes tottally op forget weak to strong like it said in the beggining he turns out op its just i just cant im sorry if anybody does like this then good for you?
It's likely that the Demon Lord Later will use a method that is quite cunning to win the battle. But who knows, I'm waiting for the next sequel.
When Young Justice reccommended this novel to me I can say I was intrigued, but hesitant. It wasn't until Oliver stepped in-game that Deevi was successful in sucking me in. I am now loving how this story is delevoping! Excited for more!!Minor typos, but nothing major that kicks me out of the story.
So far one of the longest prologue books ever I mean they still haven't even got to the storyline yet it's all the stuff that characters are doing before the story started 20 chapters of prologue so far good writing though and I like the concept if it actually updated more regularly I can find out whether the story is very good or not