The world Background is lit. The character settings is very unique and interesting. The best thing is the writing quality. It is smooth and perfect making this book too immersive. Great work!!
The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck
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So far so good. There is quite a bit of swearing, but that's nothing to be surprised about. I just hope that the mc keeps his self-worth and doesn't start degrading himself to act according to what this worlds society expects of him.
Looks like a fun story, the starting is interesting, makes you wanna read and know more. Few typos and grammar errors but didn't affect the reading.Check this out, I'm sure you will like it, it's not boring lol and has a nice premise. Goodluck author ??
Chill mc, good world building. No harem/loli/dark/depressing mc, bs as of yet so im hopefull. Just hope the author enjoys writeing this peice of art and isnt to obsessed over what others think or want from isekia. THIS IS THE AUTHORS ISEKIA.
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Its a comedy, very specific humor thou.. I find it dumb and chieldish, but it might be right for you, the story isnt seriouse at all with a world where even servents can make fun of theire masters and practicaly do w/e they want, a cliche "misunderstanding" with MC's mind set of "ah ill just roll with it" - even thou it seems at first that he has he's own plans, he doesnt.Anyway its a comedy thrue and thrue without anything els, i recommend you reading and figureing out for your self if you like this kind of humor or not.
The book has really made me feel like I’m diving into a new world and I’m excited to see what is next! The writing is clear and to the point and the story pulls you in!
Quiet an Action packed story this is.Review Proper,Writing Quality: There are some g-errors but nothing much to cause not to enjoy reading the story.Story Development: The prologue start on the bond between Gao and Aichi then someone mysteriously abduct him while they are playing? If I'm correct. This already set the mood of the story. Then the Dojo grad, training and fighting leagues, many developments that would not bored the readers easily. The skills too are precisely described.Character Design: There are two characters that the author gave detailed bg story, Gao and Yue. This could make the readers focus more on how there life will grow and develop in the martial arts world. As for the other characters, there intro were not bad and maybe we could also learn more about them in the future chaps.Updating Stability: I see from the notes, that the author follows an update schedule which is good so readers could know when will the story be updated.World Background: Written Well. I see no problems here.Overall, this work is already a great read for me. I would keep this in my collections and see how the the mc's will strive in the martial arts world. Great Work Author!
I must say your writing style deviated from the common practice (using Author's Note a bit too much, and the dialogues are done differently). It takes a tremendous amount of time for people to shift their preferences, so be warned. overall, the story is good.
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