Thid novel has a great vibe,with the university setting feeling real and the characters ,especilly kiyato and Miyano pulling you in.The tension between them adds a lot of intrigue if it add a bit more sensory detail and build on their emotional struggles ,it will be even more impactful. keep going!..
This is an amazing book, good job author.
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The starting of the story is good, hoping the author would maintain the consistency in upcoming chapters!
First few chapters are very nice keep it going
it is a very good story, I like it a lot
nice and interesting and I am reviewing it
As of ch 49 I am throughly enjoying the novel. It’s hard to find a good kingdom building novel but this one scratches that itch. Atlas, the Mc is kind, tenacious and reliable. I’ve enjoyed watching his character progress from observing fights to actively training in harsh environments and fighting above his level. While I am a bit disappointed that he uses a spear, I do hope he’ll use some magic in the future.Galanteo does a great job bringing all the characters to life. The teams’s reactions to Mira have me crying laughing ??. I know the author has fun writing those scenes. My favorite characters are Mira and poor Milo. Hopefully he integrates with the rest soon ??.I’m only just starting so I can’t say anything about update stability, but if we base it off of legendary broken player, we shouldn’t have anything to worry about. There are slight hints of romance, probably a sisterhood in the future. (Do it ?) The fight scenes are just long enough to be satisfying but not too long that I have to skip chapters. All in all, if you enjoy kingdom building, fantasy, romance and comedy, you should check this novel out. As always, great job author ???
I guess it’s interesting? we will see if it fall or land or fly to the heavens and become a new star for us. i read the intro just now and from it i can conclude as the wise sage the MC will die many times.
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Ek ladki bhigi bhagi siSoti raaton mein jaagi siMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmDil hi dil mein chali jaati hainBighdi bighdi chali aati hain... (x2)Doondh laut ti huwi balka ti huwiSaawan ke suni raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat haiHmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Daagmag daagmag lehki lehkiBhooli badh ki behki behki... (x2)Machli machli gharse nikhliPaghli si kali raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Tan bheega hai sar geela haiUs kaa koyi pech bhi dheela hai... (x2)Tan ti jhukti chalti ruktiNikli andheri raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si
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