Shameless Author here, I'm rating my book 5.0. Thanks for reading! This was originally for an English project but I turned this book into my webnovel story. I hope this can be the start of my serializing journey.
I m not fan of digital content reading but this one has got me. Really appreciate the creator's effort for an engaging sci fi. Would like to have hard copy of it.
While the synopsis sounded like it would lead to an interesting Claok and dagger style story, instead we get an Isekai.The quality of the writing form a techincal standpoint is better than most stories I have read here on Webnovel, but there are more than a handfull of tiems where the author suddenly switches narrating perspectives, has a few words repeated by what I assume to eb mistake or some tense mistakes.As for the story itself, whiel it starts of interestingly enough, it soon devolves into the same cliche ridden thing as most Isekai stories. Up to this point most characters felt very much one dimensional or proped up by tropes and cliches. The story developed at a decent, but rather slow pace, while the world as shown so far has little to nothign special to it compared to many other Isekais, but has neither anythign obviously wrong with it.All in all I got to say if you want a different flavor of the standard Isekai, this story is better than at elast 80% of what Webnovel has to offer you. If not, it probably isn't the story for you.
Boys, you got a masterpiece don't let it go to waste.Also never give up for the sake of the reader and just stay the same until something has to change.
REJECT HUMANITY RETURN TO MONKE YOU PEASANTS HAHA ........................................................................................
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I stopped reading after few chapters.before ending of a first chapter a bully/ silk pant came and stoping him from training.no physical attacks that time. same day after this bully see the mc practicing out side didn't do anything.next day after getting system mc decided to kill bully. and killed him infront of every one from school. yeah mc and Willian are just school boys.ps: bully has a martial artist older brother and powerfull family behind him. so you know what happened next.mc go hide then comback and kill whole clan afterwards..( my guess .... )
Trash he is simp
I swear to Cthulu, this is a literary masterpiece. Here are some other words to make up the requirement to post a review. Penis. Tenticle penis. Big penis. Bumpy penis. Horse sized penis. Long penis. Thick penis. Purple penis.
so in summary,grammar= 1/5everything else= 5/5The story is wonderful, the characters have depth.the grammar is a godless afront to mother nature
Dystopia? Check.Excellent power progression? Check.G o d ? Check.Great writing? Check.A sizeable amount of chapters? Check.Count me in? Check.Our world must not be a dystopia if web novels are of this level of quality.Greak work!