"Wait here, let me get some things."
Ling didn't get to follow up that statement since several figures came out behind the trees once they were near the barrier. When he looked closely, Ling realized that they were not all half man, half snake people.
"Of course, your Highness. Please follow me."
"Sadly, that is all it is. Since unique elements are rare, the people who could teach you spells about them are also rare." (Rose)
"Ding!"
These words were as if someone cast a stone across a still lake, sending splashes ofwater in the waves of ripples.
The meeting has ended after they talked about other stuff related to real life stuff which I don't have any concern with. They only made me go there as a formality which I can tell that they don't want me going against their plan. I'm known to be reckless anyway.
**Критика "Голливудской славы и удачи"**Оценка: 2 из 5"Голливудская слава и удача" пытается рассказать захватывающую историю о стремлении к успеху в мире шоу-бизнеса. Но, к сожалению, книга не смогла вполне удовлетворить ожидания.Главный герой, Мартин Дэвис, кажется немного плоским и не вызывает у читателя сильного эмоционального отклика. Его перипетии и приключения, хоть и интересны на первый взгляд, оставляют ощущение недостаточной глубины и сложности.Сюжетные повороты иногда предсказуемы, что лишает книгу драматического напряжения. Вместо того чтобы заставить задуматься или вызвать сильные эмоции, роман иногда скатывается в поверхностность и предсказуемость.Несмотря на эти недостатки, "Голливудская слава и удача" может быть интересна тем, кто ищет легкое и развлекательное чтение о жизни в Голливуде. Однако, она оставляет желание увидеть больше глубины и оригинальности в характерах и сюжете.
The cover looks nice and it looks interesting. Good job.
First of all it's a book with a really good plot. Worth the read and I have high expectations regarding it. One of the good revenge stories. 1) writing quality The writer progresses as they continue to write and it's very evident moreover, the chaps which need improvement are getting edited so Kudos to the author. 2) story development The author knows what they are doing. It has a good pacing and honestly, characters are well developed so the story has a good progress. 3) updating stabilityA keyboard breaking author (u2060u2060╹u2060▽u2060╹u2060u2060)4) world background Since it is contemporary with a bit of fantasy it doesn't really have much to offer but, since it is based on modern world, the author has put lots of characters interaction. Love that. Over all, an improvement in writing quality and some minor grammar would make the author a solid 5/5 but since there are still room for improvement a 4/5 for now! (u2060u2060ꈍu2060ᴗu2060ꈍu2060)Hope to see more improvement and more progress!! All the best!
This one is creatively done. It is obvious that the author put their love and care to this. It wasn’t laugh out loud funny and I noticed the author was trying their best to make up jokes, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I like all the characters for the time being, they have this real aura attached to them, the novel is a Slice of Life after all and I expected them to be that way. SoL is my cup of tea but I can’t speak for everyone. Keep it up, I’ll be waiting for more.
Okay where do I start…. I dont really understand why this novel has such a high rating. I started reading it only because I generally like this kind of story and it had a high rating. Now after about 60 Chapters I’m dropping it out of the following reasons: - Fighting in general is just unrealistic. Take the first few chapters for example: Untrained, weak and stupid MC gets chased by a pack of wolves. He climbs on a tree, breaks off a few twigs, somehow magically sharpens them and then throws them like olympic champion and impales all enemies….Of course ! And stuff like that happens again and again. - The System/Powerscaling is just completely random. He basically just kills wolfs at first, which are like the weakest creatures, and suddenly he is the stongest guy in town. As if every other citizen never fought a single battle. Apparently the wolves are pretty abundant in this reason but only he leveled up significantly. I mean he is the hero but as far as I know, that just means he has no level cap. A System is a good way to set up a frame for your story. How do things work? What are you capable off and what do you need to do to get stronger. Doesn’t really work if your MC is playing by different rules! And dont even talk about the 400 ultimate skills he colllects left an right from every mop character that exists . - The MC is just annoying….he starts as a guy who has basically no self esteem, no real will to live and who doesnt stand up for himsel….that itself is not a bad thing, it’s just how the story is. Then he gives up his humanity and becomes a typical cliche villain who explains his evil plan, mocks his opponent for beeing week and then gets nearly killed in the next second .He just feels inconsistent….For example he just knows lots off stuff that he actually shouldn’t know just because he read a book for a few hours and in the next second he makes completely stupid decisions, like killing three guys and stealing their wagon afterwards. I mean if i kill someone the first thin i do is stealing their car and park it in my driveway ? Well if you can look over the things i wrote, than you might enjoy this novel but i stopped reading it and will probably not continue it. I’m no native speaker, if you find some mistakes, you are allowed to keep them ?