Yaa this Novel is all about...wanaa bee a herooo...lol...okk I just read 200+ chapters...over all mc didn't have much of his own life...it's like...if one wants to light up the whole world, one has to burn like sun...and although story it self is not that good but intentions are nice...so it's a good novel
Is that a extra 0?
great novel. ending was alright but i would have liked for something like an epilogue chapter which described the rest of his life. all in all a good read. 8/10 would recommend
The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character.
Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter.
The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.
Okay I'll be honest. I didn't make it to chapter 50. The book has a good plotline and I'm sure it's amazing to those who can read it but I just can't. I advise the author to grab a person they know with the best grasp of English and have them edit the book. It just can't shine under so many errors
Please continue. You're doing a great job
I love all of your stories so much, but this one seem really promising!!
Huh, zombie clone? So he kind of have an unlimited(Maybe limited? Most of the time, it sound nice in description only to have restriction in story) zombie goon that will follow his command and anything they do will have exp transfer to him? Why did the first guy commit suicide then?
This is actually an amazing story. I hope this gets picked. This is the type and quality of stories I want to see. It’s Been awhile since Webnovel and given us something like this
Here's my opinion of this novel. it started out fine, the character building wasn't very bad, and the world building was good too and I enjoyed the beginning. But then the MC became "Bipolar" what he does and what he says, keep jumping all over the place.Sometimes doesn't even make sense and the comedy skits, becomes cringeworthy. I mean, If you're 10 years old you might like it.. which isn't realistic as this is an 18+ novel, but me as an adult, I can't. So the big question is, who is the target audience for this novel?. Idk.. This is just my opinion/review Writing Quality - 3/5SOF - 5/5Story Dev - 2/5Character Design - 3/5World background - 4/5Overall 3.4/5
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Haha looks interesting! I've seen novels with similar premise for Otome reincarnations on JPs but never for a CN. I didn't think there would be a story like this. Well too soon to judge but maybe it'll be good???