DanaaRana
i am really missing its chapter . Hope its mass releases.I liked this web novel very much. Please come fast. I liked everything about this novel very much.
zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.
I really do like this story the author did very good in blending two worlds together. I just wish he would keep it going so please keep going.
It is okay. the characters are flat at times, but the way they act to each other is good, they are pretty cool. Also some cool superpowers. It is pretty cool, and I do like it... Not an amazing story, but an interesting one. B
The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell.
Don takes you on a fantastic voyage of life with an elder god stuck to your soul!
hello don, i read ur hwbs ,its awsome,i want u to read " the protagonist are killed by me" and make some novel taking inspiration from it, i bet u coul make a gr8 novel out of it, the original has good concept but not gr8 execution
I really hate it when it stops at a cliffhanger and it's far from good enough to pay that much money. Usually I switch to other sites at those moments, sadly it can't be found anywhere else, so I'm gonna drop it now.BECAUSE: It isn't good enough to pay money!!
I love this story sooo much, I haven't seen a fanfiction on cricket ever and this is the best one I can just tell, sooo please mass release soon my man.
I have to give this novel a 4.8. It's too good. Better than My House of Horrors. I'd give it a solid 5 if only the word count was longer. Highly recommended. It's basically A Serenade for the Innocent in Chinese form with way more detail. Its incredibly impressive and went further and exceeded beyond the limits of my expectations. Very similar to Here Lies the Wicked with more of an Chinese feel. Normally, I wouldn't think that possible. I'd like to say good job for the author in making this miracuclous work and thank you to the translators and editors for putting time and effort into changing it into English with a spinechilling story and effects.
MC is a poor dude who just wants to open a restaurant but gets thrown into every conceivable reality-ending plan in the multiverse.Gu Qing Shan is now a regressor! (A common cliche, but whatever)He came from the future where the Demon Order fucking murder death killed everything. So now he does his best, but shit just keeps happening. Poor man gets no breaks.At first he had to deal with the government, then with the literal apocalypse, then some otherworldly colonizers/destroyers/whatever, and now it's him juggling a dozen different situations, while trying to keep his head attached to its neck.If you think that was stressful, see the women around him...Su Xu-er, is a bit frustrating, she at first did not believe MC to have the strength to do something so she locked him in a room and went herself. Then author pulls something and says ooooo this girl is the heir to the xxx. Yipee.Anna is alright, alcoholic-fighter. Lin is alright too, I guess.Tianma girl is whatever.but the best is #teamimpartialgodessif you're a real reader of WAO you should support impartial goddess, impartially. No questions asked. Anyways, MC doesn't solve all situations with brute strength, he uses a shit ton of tricks and schemes too. It's been a while since i've seen a MC with more than 2 brain cells. I don't really want to spoil much, with the exception of constant conflict and little "slice of life" time, it's an exciting read.
lost interest just at the beginning... there's too much going on
