Honest review. The author really knows how to tell a story. The character's conversation is not forceful and I loved it. Unique plot. I hope you'll be able to finish the book. I added it to my library to make sure I'm updated ❤️
It was really good until the mc suddenly just gets saint level (the stongest cultivation state in this book) techniques, relics, treasures in succesion after he established his foundation :(.Before that he has to make do with subpar, forbidden techniques and bide his time against his enemies. It was way more interesting back then.
Read if you like :Family bonding, deep dark secrets, coherent and immersive writing.Don’t read if:You’re bothered by supernatural evil since there are quite a few elements. (Not a spoiler since I didn’t specify). Golden thumb check.Secret identity check.Overprotective family check.Note: The story went dark quickly, yet still had humor. If only my inner religious child didn’t scream. Well, anyways my two cents
I truly like the idea and the concept of this... the beginning was very good... there were some grammatical errors but we can turn a blind eye to them... as the story progressed I feel the relation of mc a bit forced... his sudden change of personality makes me feel like he is a hypocrite and its confusing, it happened many times, the author mentioned it many times that what his aim was by (A/N) and it irked me many times because people should be able to get what you are trying to convey by reading story only... as we progressed I started feeling I was reading a low tier cultivation novel except it is a magical world... And trust me I have read my fair share of cultivation novels and I could predict what is going to happen, so my thrill ends as soon as the author tries to bring the cultivation type of deal...
i like this novel very much especially in the recent arcs. its always exciting and making me wanting more. the author also improved a lot, especially the writing. love this novel. dont drop.
webnovel needs to sort out its trial reading as this is annoying I want the updates we are owed and I want them now, they should stope changing how they do things
Ok, I had previously posted a review but it got deleted by mistake,so I'll just post it again.So,this story has a unique idea of a villian fighting against the heroes or the protagonist.Although it is not that unique since there are plenty of villian protagonist novels out there but a villian protagonist obviously recieves a lot of backlash since he is both a villian and a protagonist, it's like joining two sides of the coin together.even if the protagonist enemies dies in a fair fight that would still be considered a plot hole since the enemy doesn't behaves like a hero so it is really difficult to write a satisfying story with it,however this novel mc nails it.The story has a MC one can somewhat relate to,he is not stupid but not an All knowing God either.He can only operate within his own scope of knowledge.Coming from the future gives him an advantage but his opponents weren't nearly stupid enough to tell him all their past plan's details.So he has to struggle through it.He makes mistakes and is not perfect,he sometimes acts stupidly but also tries to learn from it.Secondly,the characters are all given thought into.All characters whether it be the MC,his enemies, or mobs they all have their own motivations, stories and schemes laid out.In the early chapters,the web of schemes gives the feeling that the MC who is surrounded by the web of schemes and enemies he cannot get out of even with his background and that our Mc and his background is both useless.It quite honestly frustrates you so much that you start cursing the author and even consider dropping this but when the Mc succeeds you feel the joy multiplied by that much too,so it has it's ups and downs.World building-I will not say much about this .Again world building Is given proper thought as well.Both the future from the Mc and even facts about history is well written and they are in one way or another relevant to the story or affects the story.Update stability- The updates are frequent and regular,you normally wouldn't have to worry about when it is going to be updated,there are times when there are 4ch/day. it really speaks volumes of how hard the author works on it.But the number of updated chapters are really inconsistent it can be 1,2,3 or 4 chaps/day No one knows.It is 2chaps/day nowadays.I understand that author has his own life too but I am not really too happy about it, so a point minus for that.Overall writing style - the writing style is fluid and it Is difficult to find out plot holes though that maybe because author does not provides any heads or tails of stuff.the reader have to do it themselves.Basically based on volume 1 the story unfolds in various stages, different elements and characters are introduced to make the story more intriguing and unpredictable.Until the author says it himself.I am positive no one can predict the flow of the story,though a lucky guess is still possible,until now at least.Grammar- Let's just say this.I do not really care for grammar.As long as the basic grammar conditions like the comas,space between lines and words and the sentences make sense.I do not really care for thinks like the positioning of words and stuff.So my sense for perfect grammar might be different than others.Though in this story you probably not face such a problem.At least I did not so that's that.Overall it's a great story with well written characters, thought out world building,frequent updates and a fluid writing styles.Ask for more and you simply want a beating.I am not really a person to write a review for a novel but I am writing for this one in hopes that more people would see this and support this novel and perhaps the author would not drop this or mess this up.Its been a long time since I surfed through the internet and find a novel with such great potential.
What is evil?!? What is good?!? These are just childish words and naive beliefs, there is no good and evil there are only benefits, the strong is the law doing what he wants, simply without drama. I wish I could see the real human beast break the shackles and unleash it. Devour the world and kill whoever gets in the way or kill to increase your strength, there is no such thing as the innocent and the bad, in front of the strong all are insects. Haha I have high expectations for you
There are a few chapters that you have to re read to grasp what is going on and sometimes it is difficult to understand who said what but this is definitely worth a read, I am loving this book.The protagonist himself is quite fascinating biologically, and more often than not seems to take the path of least resistance, and his system isn't over powered but is very relevant. And the world he resides in both scares the stuffing out of me and sets my heart aflutter whith all the monsters and ancient cultureal and mythological references. And also people(s) in this story? They are realistically barbaric and suck as people and monsters do, and I am pulled in by it all.
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Great story! I really love this webnovel. The writing is really easy to understand too!! :D I totally recommend this webnovel. I wish that there were more stories like this though :D
It has a very detailed start and the story line gives the sense and feel of the environment he is currently in. And the background of the character was also good unlike how in other manhuas etc