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Why wasn't this novel picked up? It's a breath of fresh air, and actually written very very nicely. I highly recommend it if you like unique and solid world building and fun characters that are fleshed out.
It hast a good beginning i like the Abyss thing but everything else ist just frustrating too read.
I'm worried for the author's health. I think he needs to go and get checked for Alzeheimers.
Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
author dropped this, so dont even bother reading it. ffs why do they even put dropped books in the queue.
I really don't have a thing about perfection, but hey it suits the story very well and you really did it. Not like it's totally flawless but I just can't give you less.. I.. I just can't. It's really great, excluding the update stability which the world of readers really wants. Nice work anyways hahaha Hope you continue giving us great story development. See ya in your next updates ^^
While it is an okay story this book just has too many things wrong with it to be amazing. First is that this book does not do any explaining of the setting or give the characters backgrounds. While I know this is a common thing on this site but there are just a lot of grammar mistakes in it too. The story just progresses too fast it doesn't stay on a topic it just goes through story lines extremely fast. Would not recommend.
Pretty solid story, MC is well written and the power system is simple and easy to understand
I have read upto chapter 30 so far and the other characters are not that interesting but still enjoying the story so far
Will read after you reach 40 chapter !
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A very nice and wonderful novel.
Your explanation in each scene is good, one can understand everything.
I've not read a game novel before but this, is actually nice.
Great work author ✌️
i will just go ahead and give it 5 stars. i may have some opinions. but yeah. Sci-Fi. is the hardest type of book to writhe. to much content to look for and lot of detail. and to find a book this good is just wonderful.
i enjoyed reading it, its very interesting story the Main character reminded me of RI. i would love to see this book succeed.
YOUR STORY IS NICE
It's great that you update your story often but It seems like You update TOO often
you have an average of making 2-4 chapters a day...
/DO YOU EVEN REST?!/
but i respect you because the book is amazing.
(Im gay. /lesbian/ )