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don't have anything to criticize about, because it's surprisingly well-written.
I am 89 out of 89 chapters in, and this is a great book so far. The world building is solid, you are instantly thrown into the story and can quickly grasp the situation and understand the stakes. As things are explained, you don’t feeling like you are being talked down to, or your intelligence as a reader is being underestimated. Even when things are being overtly explained, I feel connected to the world and want to learn more. A lot of stories deal with monster hunter turned monster, and there are a variety of ways the character can come to terms with it. This story finds a nice balance in that, between nature vs. nurture and a certain level of supernatural influence. I feel connected to Luciel and his journey. As well as to his relationships, both vampiric and human. He believes a balance cannot be struck between the two sides, while trying to maintain that balance in his own life. It’s a good concept and I’m genuinely rooting for him. My only qualm with this story is the system. When it feels like every story you read has the system troupe, it was refreshing to see one without it. So when it got added, I was a bit disappointed. That being said, I honestly don’t think it takes away from the story. While this system is just like any other, compared to other stories with systems, it fits in nicely. The system is flavored in such a way that makes sense rather than being an author’s shortcut to presenting information. It fits within the context of the story. While I believe that the story could work without having a system, especially considering we made it 86 chapters before it was introduced, I also don’t think it will take away from the story either. I am interested to see how it will affect things moving forward. If you are like me, at least wait till chapter 89 before making your final judgement on the system. There is one simple sentence there that convinced me on it. All that being said, I highly recommend this story, it ticks all the right boxes. Go ahead and give it a shot!
everything is good guys i just fing this line funny ??( killed by his giant sword ) IYKYk
dear author why did you make the mc so frustrated but still a good novel i'm just very annoy on how you write the mc
It’s me again! I really can’t believe very few only viewed this novel. This is really highly recommended! Very interesting and unique! You won’t regret reading each journey/chapters. There’s also romance/love story.
i love this book , the protagonists , both male and female are awesome
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
A very unique approach to storytelling with a nice personal touch. The author has seamlessly blended politics with history and created a realistic and gritty world.
Keep up the half sexy half serious suff your doing I get a good laugh and get going with this series. I hope it continues for a bunch of chapters
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