CristinaDomingos
So confused. Started well then few chapters in it was a totally different story
I think this is a 5 Star read, but leaving the ending open and calling the story complete. I'm a bit disappointed as to how much this unfinished story cost me.
nice tho hhh
great book hated to see it end.
This is great.
Awesome.
I love it Author.
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great read! I really liked this book. very few errors and you connect with the characters and almost feel like you're in they're shoes. you can feel the emotions, struggles, and joys. great job author
The pure desire for a compelling character to grow stronger is evident, but I can't help but notice the connection to reincarnation novels, like this one seems to borrow from. What's the ultimate goal behind it all? In reincarnation stories, a key theme is humanity's weakness and self-destruction, where the protagonist transforms society to face off against cosmic powers. However, in this context, we're dealing with incomprehensible eldritch beings that tower inhabitants struggle to grasp. The main character's plan boils down to simple strength-seeking, without a clear objective.
Additionally, the tower tutorial giving an outsider's egg raises curiosity – could it be a defense mechanism by the tower or a genuine egg? Chapter progression hasn't reached the hatching yet, leaving that question open. While over 135 chapters exist, creating an account seems unnecessary for me at this point.
Nonetheless, it's been an enjoyable read.
I couldn't help but think that maybe some of the reviews are off base. Yes, the main character (MC) is overpowered (OP), but that's due to his natural talent and relentless hard work. Even though he has a system that aids his training, ultimately, it's his dedication that drives his success. He trains from morning till night, and even during his sleep, he enters the system to hone his sprinting and hurdling skills.
It might seem unfair to other athletes because of the system’s rewards, such as stamina recovery and fast healing. However, these benefits are limited—only 10% recovery every 10 minutes or up to 60-70% recovery per hour. Additionally, the MC is the shortest among the other field and track athletes, standing at 177 cm when the story starts. He grows a bit, maybe around 2.5 cm, but he still faces a height disadvantage, especially in hurdles.
Please don’t misunderstand and underestimate the MC’s hard work in this story. Labeling him the same as other overpowered main characters isn’t fair. And he’s not winning every competition, contrary to what some reviews claim!
By the way, reading machine-translated light novels can be frustrating. I’d love a thoroughly translated version, but I’m not sure if anyone will take it up.
Anyway, I’ll give this 5 stars because I really like, appreciate, and admire the MC’s hard work, commitment, and determination.
Everything is trash. This FanFiction was good at the first 15 chapters but right after that the fanfic took a real turn.
Matter of fact this cant even be called a fanfic after that point. This fanfic turned into a Cultivation novel.
Everyone in the entire story acts like those people from Xianxia and Xianxua novels
THE ELEMENT OF SURPRISE
I would advise reading the manga first and continuing from there, otherwise it gets a bit repetitive without imagery. However this is probably my most favorite LN of all time, I was in tears at the end.
Is it? Is this a newly upload novel so the rating are still zero or something
