InvincibleWarrior
Dear author, I adore your work with these main characters. Happy to read you punching all the clichés in the face. The character and world building are unique! It is written very nicely and interestingly, I don’t know English and I read with the help of a translator, but this does not diminish my pleasure from the process! More time and energy to continue, I'm looking forward to the new chapter! Fabulous!
No words needed it’s plotarmor MUNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAseriously it’s a good novel already a league above the rest when you take into consideration that most novels here have horrible grammar and Mtl’s somehow are being pushed.The world building so far is good butis being built slowly for the new readers as most people who read villain cultivator already have a general idea of how the world is which btw is great definitely give it a read.A bit slow at the start and more information being dropped but entertaining nonetheless anyways this isn’t a professional thought out review but still give it a read.I expect great things of you MUNYAAAAAAA
Definitely a hidden gem on this website.The writing quality (grammar etc.) is very good.The characters are quite dynamic and I really like the world building until now.I really hope the author doesn't drop this.
I really don't like novels were the MC breaks the entire world's system in the first chapters. Why even spent time establishing a world, not that copying pokemon is great, but still, why spent the time only to shatter everything to make the MC look OP?There are no twists, no suspense and no immersion. This is literally a stomp festival in written form.Might be fun as a fanfiction for pokemon, but as a stand alone work? Just terrible.
honestly probably my favorite novel on the site at the moment. As this novel is essentially coming from a researcher point of view while also running as a cultivation novel, I only have two regrets with this novel and that is the lack of personal action Robin has seen so far, which in hindsight is understandable considering how weak he technically is when talking about only cultivation level. and my other regret is that one chapter just isn't enough for me since the novel is so good ?.
This is not a genre that I would usually read, but it intrigued me a lot! I absolutely enjoyed the world building and the characters! I have absolutely nothing to complain about here.
Keep it up, author
I love it. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I really love this story it is an amazing story and I really enjoy reading the story. The plot is so good and the characters are very well written.
Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review.I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this.I'd advise you to keep going, though.Why?Because it's a good story!As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book!Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.
MC is a loser who instantly agrees to help the used succubus like a slave.
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I'm really enjoying the new story found a few errors but not enough to complain about, the only concern I have is that I'm worried you'll neglect your other stories
