InvincibleWarrior
My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author
Inconsistent shitHelmet costs 30 000 no mention of currency usedHe earns 25 000 but doesn't see a need to use 20 000 for a helmetNot clear on travelNot clear on death penaltyNot clear on mapsNot clear on how long he played game before Reincarnated Not clear on who experts actually areNot clear on what is in inventory said their is only 10 spaces but he has alot more than 10 items
In the pile of endless garbage this one shines the most. The most promising novel in this trial read(for me). Oh yeah there is also Pokemon's and other anime reference. It's great. And there's also the fact that the author probably add a meme that a caterpie evolve into Rayquaza. I wonder if anyone has ever realized this.
Highly addictive, push this 1 out so i can spend coins! Great story about the struggle of becoming a mage in a world where the npc are highly intelligent.
Keep up the good work, hope you can carry this novel till the end.Grammar a bit wishy-washy, here and there but everything thing else is great.
Great book!! I'm only on chapter 120 or so but so far it is an amazing book. I highly recommend you read this story! I have already taken the the time to buy the first fifty chapters that are locked and they don't even start for another 100 chapters or so.
I was expecting more character development before the protagonist’s easy win. The main character had no police/law enforcement/ forensic training before transmigrating with a detective system golden finger. In the first case, the golden finger replayed the whole murder before the protagonist put in any effort. Then, his boss agreed to arrest the suspect with out a warrant or any direct evidence in hand (Cultureal Differences?). I would have preferred if the system only told him that a murder occurred and then forced the protagonist to solve the rest himself. Bottom line the protagonist’s golden finger made him look cool to other characters but did not cause any personal growth.
Yazarı ne kadar tebrik etsem azdır çok güzel kaleme alınmış bayıldım (: Mutlaka okumalısınız pişman olmazsınız gerçekten yazmayı hiç bırakmaman dileğiyle
I Really like this one Make moke Chapters pretty pretty Please small IDEA why Not Have the MC Join Goku until a Little after He turns Into a giant APE
This made me feel like I'm on a high school campus in Japan. The story is good, but now for the flaws...You missed a lot of places where you should put punctuation.I advise you to show not tell. Information dumps are dreaded by readers! Try not to tell your readers too much while showing them a whole lot.
I’ll be honest. I NEED to read this story!! Please vote for this! Please! I’m really interested! Help me.Also. I hope I can make it in to at least 50 chapters without having to pay. That I puke only make my day better.
This novel is a straight up cuck novel.Don't bother reading it. His wife cheats on him, he divorces her, her family bully him, he is secretly rich, he TRIES to take revenge, then gets together with his ex-wife, like bruh????Then I skipped a few chapters and now I see he is dating his colleage who had an affair with an old man and the old man proposes to her her inside her car??Also his ex-wife was pregnant with a child but they break up soon so I guess it was someone else's child ( atleast what I think).Anyways I just summed up the whole novel for you till chapter 180.You're Welcome ?
