It's quite early to tell whether it will be a good webnovel the story can go in various routes ( the chapter I have read up to) . But still the early chapter were good, I do have great expectations for the novel and I hope the author keeps it. Overall it's worth to give it a try. It's far better than the other novels on this platform ?️.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book from start to finish. The storyline was captivating, with well-developed characters that felt real and relatable. The author’s writing style was engaging, and the pacing kept me hooked throughout. The themes explored were thought-provoking and resonated with me long after I turned the last page. It’s clear a lot of care and effort went into crafting this story, and it’s definitely one I would recommend to anyone looking for a great read. A truly satisfying experience!
Loving this.. The bickering between kaelith and Ember and oh did it just get hot with his dad???
A very interesting novel, fun to read and it’s update stability is quite good.I like the plot it’s not just an Radom fast paced story the character development is lovely.
What will he do about his family when he gets stronger? Do you plan to destroy them all or will you forgive them? If you forgive me, I'll stop reading. They don't deserve any forgiveness. None of them deserve forgiveness. Father, brothers and mother. If you forgive them, they're meaningless.
just like it. although the story is cliche...
Absolutely inspiring, please author can you make the other chapters fast, it is so entertaining ! For the others, go read those chapters with no hesitations !
There’s only a few chapters as of right now but it is already pretty interesting and I’m liking how the story is going so far. I also enjoy the main chracters so far. ???
This novel got me hooked with only the first three chapters, I can say this because the author knows what he's doing, read this novel and thank me because damnnn this is a gem ? Type shi ❤️❤️
I read the novel, its amazing and fabulous.
I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters:The first three chapters of this story lack any real sense of originality, depth, or meaningful conflict. The characters feel more like placeholders, their struggles predictable, and the plot nothing more than a series of events happening without any real emotional investment or tension. The writing is overly reliant on genre clichés without attempting to subvert or innovate. What could have been an intriguing fantasy with a unique protagonist feels instead like a string of uninspired tropes and plot devices designed to move the story along, but never giving the reader a reason to care. If the author is serious about improving this series, a complete overhaul of the characters, pacing, and plot structure is necessary—there’s simply nothing here worth investing in.Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4 ⭐ and hope it gets better.
The fighting scene is cool. The plot development is good. The MC is smart. It looks fast paced, the MC's strength grew very fast.