Even though is your first novel, have already seen a future in it, not that am a judge or anything Hahaha ??...The point is that I really do love your book, it really interesting, the prologue alone got be questioning, Please do keep on updating, I love your book so much ??
please anyone know the raw of this novel? or atleast this novel other name. i already search but i cannot find it. .
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Hello dear readers,I wanted to write a comment after 3 years to update y'all on things that have happened and why I decided to stop progressing with this novel.When I started this novel I was going into high school and wanted to do this as a side project to hopefully earn money (which didn't work out). By the time I got to around 30 chapters in I was losing interest in being an author because I had found a group of friends and most of my time was spent playing games and going through school. While I have graduated high school; I don't believe that I will have the free time with the upcoming semester of college. Maybe one day I will pick it back up and be able to write a grand story for you dear readers, but I'll be going through rigorous classes at college while I pursue a Bachelors in Computer Science and won't have time since I'll be preoccupied with studying and the gym.I'm sorry to have let y'all down and hopefully can understand my situation. I appreciate the kind comments on some chapters that I've received over the years and I hope that y'all go on to do some amazing things. Just remember to keep your head up and follow your heart.With love, "Devouring Immortal's" Author.
great novel. I love it especially the mc who is kindhearted but acted like a evil villain.i truly fall in love with this novel. keep it up like this.
A good story about the child of shamelessness, Writen by the progenitor of shamelessness.The story is still in its infancy but it has a lot of potetial with a hilarious protagonist. The world settings are looking good so long but there is a little lack of information to put the entire story in focus. Good start but if not changed it will fast lose momentum if no goal/purpus and power/economical system is added later.
As a great fan of Rebirth of the thief (CN) and Emperor of Solo Play (KR), this novel hasn't been impactful to me. To put it simply, I don't like how the MC act because It doesn't make sense (at least to me).The MC joined a gaming union in which he had to collect gold each week as a compensation for the renting fee of the Gaming Helmet. But, the problem arose when the Union's gold collection team was already full. He arrogantly said that he could gather 20 gold each week and the union accepted. (Voila, he got himself into a 3-months contract and he had to submit 20 gold per week to the union)The problem is, 20 gold is a HUGE amount. It's even equal to the Gaming Helmet's price (30,000$) (This is based on a chapter in which the author said that 63 silvers equal to 1000$, ****** math -> 20 gold = +-25,000$). Well, he managed to earn that much on his first day. But if he's that confident, isn't it better to get a loan from even a loan shark, duh?The game lore used a lot of names from WoW and other Blizzard-games and that's a minus to the originality. All in all, it's still an enjoyable read if you are pretty bored. But, Rebirth of the Thief and Emperor of Solo Play leave this novel in the dust.
Dropped at chapter 70. Writing quality becomes horrendous after chapter 40. Gender pronouns constantly messed up. Names translated several different ways so you never know who is talking. Sentences occasionally being complete nonsense. Paragraphs will occasionally miss punctuation entirely. So you dont know if someone is talking or thinking. It's just confusing and hard to read. Not to mention zero information is given on world back ground. That includes the game world. then there is the newbie characters able to get equipment/mechs that one shot God like beings. I really tried but it is very hard to enjoy in its current state. Needs an editor desperately. Then maybe a chapter or two added to the beginning dedicated to building the real world and game world. Maybe the MC history.
i just starting reading this novel and is good so far----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The synopsis is very interesting. The story plot is great and the writing style is very well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
The reviews all looked good but the story just seems like super generic face slapping situations and a protagonist that walks around like he is god amongst men. Might end up better later, but for now seems cliche and generic
Love this book so far it goes 0-100 real quick. The spacing of the book is amazing it takes time to explain certain details but it doesn't take long enough to get into the action.