FantasyLord
I love this author. She updates regularly and the details bring the story to life. My only complaint is no transition between storylines. Most authors use a dash or something to make readers aware of character/story changes. It causes slight confusion at times, but not enough to ruin the story.
The synopsis is intriguing, am really enjoying this story
love it!!!!!!!!!
I'm screaming, this book totally got me hooked
How frequent do you update?
Must read well not disappoint at all
how often do you update the English version
I can’t wait for Frazer to do the math and figure out that Sev is his son!
l think madeline and jeremy are not wise people why to they keep deveived by others they keep falling in people's traps you would think that by now they know that you can't trust people so l tired of the same thing happening to them the content of the book is the same betrayal over and over again
Wow, I like this story.
At first It writtens in First POv of Female lead but I am bit confused when it turns 3rd POv but I understand the story more in 3rd POV because it really shows the emotions of all the characters on the story. Keep it up, Author!
Alright, I'm just curious to witness the younger twin's utter downfall. Spoiler alert: Lying to your identical sibling, betraying their trust, even selling off family treasures? Come on, that's just despicable. I truly hope they experience intense jealousy, neglect, and a sense of insignificance.
The overall storyline is impressive, featuring a meticulously crafted universe and intriguing variations on the setting. The author clearly excels in this kind of narrative, but some aspects feel underdeveloped. The transitions between scenes and perspectives are seamless, which can make it challenging to follow the progression. The attribution of dialogue is lacking, making it hard to distinguish speakers. The translation is decent, but lacks polish, with minimal editing and occasional inconsistencies in name translations.
This doesn't appeal to me at all. There's a lack of action; it's like watching paint dry. The main storyline停滞不前, and events progress so slowly that I could skip entire sections without missing anything significant. It feels like the story should have concluded much earlier, around chapter 60, yet there are still 40 more chapters left! I just can't continue.
