The MC seems a scaredy cat that run away from everything, he doesnt try to become stronger at all and doesnt even listen to the advice his parents gave him. He use his own logic without thinking about facts and ehat other tell him, "If I think it's like that, it's like that". He has talent, but doesnt fight at all; putting talent on a person like that is wasted..
Sorry to be so mean for my first review but I want the author to take conscience that his story is event more chidlish than my little poney. The mc has only one setbacks that he forgets in the first ten chapters that is his wife’s betrayal although the author could have used this to give the mc a more complex personality than «i love everyone, everyone is beautiful come with me pluck flower». He could have used this to create a more complex relationship with lu and his friends. Like he doesn’t trust any women and is a perfect bastards until he finds the female lead.The character of the stories are either here to help the mc either... Sorry there is only this sort of character.The mc is born :Rich (check)In a lovely family (check, btw i love you lu)With true friens (check)With insane luck (check, if one day he goes in a forest i expect him to at least found a unicorn)The things with stories with a system is that it makes all too easy there are no exterior problems that the mc won’t be able to take care of. So please create some real problem.
Classic anime protagonist
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Finally out of the zillion cultivation clones something original. Unique hero, that is powerful but does not feel like he has a plot armor, convincing romance, realistic characters and interactions, a plot that moves on without feeling like the author clones episodes (looking at you library of heavens path). Defiantly, something better then most of the offers out there.
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