Wish you the best for the WPC! The book deserves it. Sadly, I'm short on power stones right now, but I will give you some tomorrow!
I'm so hooked, I like how the story had been progressing. Though it's a slow paced story it is easy to understand and follow. Looking forward to more chapters more character development.??
In my opinion, like all of this authors works, the MC is tortured to oblivion. Progression is fine if there was ever a point, and normally the point is to achieve victory or a good climax otherwise known as "Face Slapping". But this is just borderline plain masochism. There is no pleasure in reading this novel so far. Just livid darkness. Sometimes, painful and frustrating events are tolerable to read in novels like this if the conclusion of an arc is satisfying enough. But as with this authors other books so far, this one is the same. It fails so miserably to give you that moment of victory. TLDR: A depressing waste of time.
Plot of the stories great.Specially the part when is describ inner thought of the goddess. I have to say it was a unique part.'man it was creepy~I still have a goosebumps'
isn't he too op what the essence then.....
Overall, this would be a great story if only there was an editor to fix all the grammar, run on sentences, and spelling mistakes. Also, there is a lack of consistency with the names of characters which is slightly annoying when trying to read. If you can ignore those things the story is great.
I like this a lotI’m not some expert writer/reader able to nitpick the books for minor mistakes or anything but I enjoy this
This is my first review, so here we go. I really like the idea of the story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I advise you to rewrite the chapters because your book has a lot of potential. By the way, the character of Thomas is quite annoying, literally, so I'd really like to see him eliminated or help find a new body for charles to get in upcoming chapters.p.s this review is purely based on the first few chapter
Despite liking this novel in the beginn ing, it has since them turned increasingly dark to the point i can no longer stomache it.
It has a good concept, but at the same time, the writing can feel a bit elementary. I just mean that even though it’s a story about nobility and princesses, it doesn’t sound very sophisticated.
This is the first game novel I am reading.I enjoy reading the synopsis and I can't wait to start reading the novel it self.Good job author ??
Need more MALE Showbiz novels rather that Wuxia novels like that one that was picked last week *cought Peasant cough*.Definately enjoy and support this novel