This story is full of holes. I don't even know where to start, because it's just that bad. Only good thing I found is the idea - but execution made it almost too annoying to read. Don't recommend.
best of the trial read of this batch .....................................................................................................................
All i can say is even if the story need improvment the character need more work because when the MC said one word everyone is like "yeah that makr sense " like if a normal people after being shout by someone will want to help them just because of some principle of the MC everyone now is playing hero saving people even if their own people die.This story is good for the people who think that "everyone need a second chance" but sorry to tell yiu when you got fired by someone in your right mind you won't think to save them i wanr to say it's a trash story just because of the Mc but whatever.Normal novel (MC fault).
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good translations. not offensively bad but offensively boring. the whole cheat is really boring, uncreative and soulless. the worldbuilding doesn't exist cuz it is unnecessary. it's a cultivation world, unless you've never read a cultivation novel you won't be bothered by this at all.my only gripe with this is that it is again b o r i n g and uninteresting. 2/5, good translation but I don't recommend this, dropping at CH 18.
Story's 30 chapter are ended i like a story where is going and i want to next chapters to see the what kind of story it is now we can check it out
New favourite novel to date, absolutely top tier. Thank you!
The author says this is a first attempt writing, but without that knowledge I never would have guessed. The language is rich and detailed with good pace and interesting characters. The MC actions at the beginning were upsetting (I very much feel for his wife), but he is not beyond redemption. Overall a very interesting read! Great work!
I Like Both Slow and Fast Story Development,and this Novel is OK for me.(sometime You just need read novel for fun Not Gaining knowledge)................................................................................................ ..........
Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.
this is the most boring book that I have read in webnovel.Maybe like his/her story the writer is checking if the readers can hold until the end.1- too many theory explanations about everything. 2- is like reading a test book. 3- I can not find a point that was entertaining
This Is a pretty good one. I enjoyed reading it and had some fun. I think that it was overall pretty well developed, Though the characters could have used a little more work.