Well nice book . But author can you let girls live peacefully and let them less prone to danger of getting them defiled it will be good , what you write more cliche scenes .
please make a restriction that only the person wearing the necklace can have the benefits like the drop of essence of whatever it was called cause it will be boring if he gives it to someone else,it is his cheat!thanks.
Probably the best translated novel I’ve read in a while.The story is not rushed and the characters have depth to them. MC is cool Would like for this story to be picked
Women are apparently objects, idiot's, or something to be concurred. MC is entitled, arrogant, and just poorly written. There could be a good story if you look past the poor writing and horrible MC but over all I say it needs to be re written.
I’m enjoying reading this, not much else to say. ????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Pretty good so far maybe Improve the writing style a bit its still good overall!
The author's writing style is very entrancing as the MC is somewhat talking directly to the reader (or at least it's conveyed that way). It makes me feel like I'm in the setting with them, which a lot of authors fail to do. In terms of writing, their sentence structure could use some work, but it seems more like a language gap issue and it really isn't a problem.The dialogue is very riveting and it doesn't allow me to stop. Knowing what all the characters are thinking and doing is so gratifying!This is an excellent start and I can't wait to see where this is heading. Awesome job, Author-sama!
I can't believe I haven't given this story a review yet! I know I am a moderator, so some people may call me biased. This story is an excellent read, and I would suggest it to anyone. The MC is perfect. The story is perfect. The other characters are perfect(Yes, even Alex).The novel is so extraordinary that I feel like I'm there, and the events and characters are real.
Dog roasting fish in the forest filled with spirit beastNice ?? idea and implementationVery interestingNo cringe power up from the start
reading this novel has become my daily routine. really interesting and fast update . plots are also really unique. please don't drop it
So it's not bad. The comedy it's just out of place and that makes it hard to read.