Author took everything from his other story and improved it greatly. Check this out if you’re into litrpg! ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀ ⠀
The novel may not be for everyone as the comedy is funny for me but it may not be funny for others. This novel and the gaia novel so far seem the best
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable.
it can be improve with time.
(with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.)
I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities.
Thankyou
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I want to see more lemon moments between Arthur and older womans. Children are a little childish so please write more about older womans. Thank you very much
he she, author joins the story, instead of MC sat down (it is "I sat down")
grammar is so bad that i skip most of the nonsense
MC arrives in a world of miniature humans to become their god
nice
i enjoyed this until the cliché OP video game system appeared. does no one know how to write a book with out using a video game system in it. use natural real cultivation. book was interesting but ill pass once I saw the AI level type system with a so called voice telling you level 1. this is a drop from me. if you like the video game system style then give it a read if you despise it like me then dont even bother. this is a dropped for me
This is a great story that should deserve 5 stars. The issue with it is that the chapters seem to get shorter and shorter but cost the same. It feels like a money grab. Most authors use the authors note tab to leave notices to readers but this story uses the announcements in the actual story to fill out the word count.
I read it for the daily limited free which allowed me to make it to chapter 130ish and I started unlocking chapters with coins up to around 270ish. It is a great story but I actually started skipping chapters to save coins because the ones I skipped didn't have much substance to them. It felt like the announcements were equal to 1/6th of the actual story we were getting each chapter.
Too bad I would have liked to keep reading but I can't justify spending my money for hardly anything in return.
Too much dog food and that is what I love!
Please more author!
More of cultivation mystery and poison mystery and Lin HuaX Lord Xie Yang!!!
Father is also good! thumbs upppp!
This is a ver good read though i find some wording to be strange i think the Premise have great potential with a lot of mistery and action. this story is very solid and is worth a read for sure.