Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake.A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly.Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.
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The sci-fi feels hit me from the first chapter. This one amazing story that you are writing. The pacing is excellent and since the plot keeps on moving the reader is forced to read further. However what intrigued me the most was your unique style of writing. You are doing an amazing job, keep it up ?
Getting thrown into a world of werewolves and vampires — not my favorite genre but this story has been written really well with some amazing description to back it. This book has a unique style of writing. The characters are depicted vividly and the drama between them is strong and very enjoyable. I also love its sprinkles of fantasy, the lycan and vampire is a powerful twist to the story. All the best!!!
This is one of the best books I've come across. It's not easy nailing a fantasy novel but the author did it. Drew me in completely and you have no choice but to keep scrolling. I love it so much. The language, the development spot on.
this entire book is like trying to read someone's very detailed summary of a book they really like but only read once, it only takes about five chapters to know exactly what I mean.
Read everything so far, due to that cover... Cough CoughAnyway, it's quite the good read, and quite interesting as well. Story is super B, and im already loving that loli vampire just after chapter 1. Author has a good imagination, and is able to tell a very good to read story.HOWEVERthere's the problem of grammar, which often appears in conversations, in which the author isnt able to properply indicate if the MC or someone else is talking, or him thinking. grammar usually gets messed up when author tries to explain a conversation that is ongoing, especially in the first chapter. it rarely appears on the later chapters though, and mostly in the longer chapters.Im assuming the author is just tired from writing kekekeanyway, other that that, I really love the story this novel tells. All I need is more uploads! And please fix chapters one, or you might lose potential readers author sama!To anyone about to read this novel, read it! its really good, and only need some fixing in the long chapters. grammar, punctuations, and indications
I rate 10 fluffs out of fluffJust for fluffOnly for fluffBecause all I appreciate is the fluffThis novel has got the fluff I live off the fluffCan’t get enough fluff For real though this novel gives me a real good laugh, sometimes I wonder if I could be like granddaddy paranoid but sadly reality has proven I can’t be. What else can I say except I am addicted to the fluff now.
Bad grammar and a stupid mc. That's all that needs to be said.
G'day mates! As of chapter 5, this novel is looking to be pretty interesting. The author has begun setting up an interesting world for Ezra to explore, along with setting up conflict right from chapter 1. I'm looking forward to reading further and seeing how this novel develops.If you're looking here debating whether you should read this, give it a try!
Nice enjoyable read. The characters all have different personalities that seem to fuse together quite nicely. I would say this is currently levels greater than your other novel in terms of character and world-building.You don't dump chapters of information on us but rather use certain parts of information during crucial times similar to other novels.Anyway, hope you continue doing what you're doing and make sure not to overwork yourself with school and maintaining both novels have steady updaate.
raw link please, also is this translated or an original because i cant find raws. comments should not be less than 140 characters.......................